Evening Carnival

shooting stars
fairground game at night
lasting memory
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Sands Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 8:30 AM
Well described special memory :)
Thomas Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 9:45 AM
Thanks, Heidi. I was trying something with enjambment that I don't think quite works, but I appreciate the comment.
Mckeithan Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 1:17 AM
Wonderful. Sounds like it was a great night. A memory created.
Thomas Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 9:48 AM
It was a great night, Oliver. This doesn't quite capture the scope of it though--I think imma write a longer piece on it ;) Hey, thanks for reading my work and taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.
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