Evening Canvas

Blended soft pastels,
Stretch across the horizon;
Painted evening sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/27/2009 10:19:00 PM
Love the canvas reference. Nice one.
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Date: 4/24/2009 8:33:00 AM
aww
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Date: 4/22/2009 7:06:00 AM
Reading you is pure delight today, I could go on reading you forever ... you are at one with the muse ... and she shines your genius ... this is so exact it's absolute
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Date: 4/22/2009 5:39:00 AM
Raul, yo are swiftly becoming a master poet. Too beautiful. You do paint a masterpiece of beauty. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/21/2009 2:11:00 PM
a vivid sundown view! Raul! well done!... Jim
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Date: 4/21/2009 1:40:00 PM
I can relate to those painted skies--so beautiful. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for the kind words on my poem. Have a wonderful day. Karen
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Date: 4/21/2009 11:47:00 AM
Painted so pretty!! poerty is a beautiful art! Wel done! Hugs, Robin
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Date: 4/21/2009 10:21:00 AM
You paint so well with words
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Date: 4/21/2009 10:21:00 AM
Impressive and creative.
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Date: 4/21/2009 9:21:00 AM
Raul, if this isn't an Oklahoma Sunset, I don't know what is! Thanks for a beautiful poem.
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Date: 4/21/2009 7:14:00 AM
thankyou raul your a good poet
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Date: 4/21/2009 6:47:00 AM
Lovely images.....a sunset in all it's beauty...God's canvas....Nice one, Raul. ~
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Date: 4/21/2009 4:16:00 AM
This is terrific brother.. you have my mind seeing the evening sky in a different way...so well done.
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Date: 4/21/2009 3:52:00 AM
The title drew me on on this one. Beautiful write Raul
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Date: 4/21/2009 3:10:00 AM
Whoa, that sounds like a follow up to mine! (The largest painting) Yours is good by the way; the first line's my favorie
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