Evening Canvas

Blended soft pastels,
Stretch across the horizon;
Painted evening sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Martin Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:19 PM
Love the canvas reference. Nice one.
Kroeger Avatar
April 24, 2009 at 8:33 AM
aww
Shango Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 7:06 AM
Reading you is pure delight today, I could go on reading you forever ... you are at one with the muse ... and she shines your genius ... this is so exact it's absolute
Winter Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 5:39 AM
Raul, yo are swiftly becoming a master poet. Too beautiful. You do paint a masterpiece of beauty. Love, Shar
Goff Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 2:11 PM
a vivid sundown view! Raul! well done!... Jim
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April 21, 2009 at 1:40 PM
I can relate to those painted skies--so beautiful. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for the kind words on my poem. Have a wonderful day. Karen
Maughan Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 11:47 AM
Painted so pretty!! poerty is a beautiful art! Wel done! Hugs, Robin
Davis Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 10:21 AM
Impressive and creative.
Atanacio Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 10:21 AM
You paint so well with words
Fuller Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 9:21 AM
Raul, if this isn't an Oklahoma Sunset, I don't know what is! Thanks for a beautiful poem.
Neese Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 7:14 AM
thankyou raul your a good poet
Richards Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 6:47 AM
Lovely images.....a sunset in all it's beauty...God's canvas....Nice one, Raul. ~
Higgins Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 4:16 AM
This is terrific brother.. you have my mind seeing the evening sky in a different way...so well done.
Ginn Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 3:52 AM
The title drew me on on this one. Beautiful write Raul
Anymore Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 3:10 AM
Whoa, that sounds like a follow up to mine! (The largest painting) Yours is good by the way; the first line's my favorie
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