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Evening Breeze

evening breeze--- a bent palm tree cradling the moon © kash poet 2012 ================ Placement:3rd ; (June 2012) Contest:No.181. Sponsor:Brian Strand

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Date: 6/21/2012 1:59:00 PM
and congrats big time!...:)
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Date: 6/21/2012 1:58:00 PM
okie.. gotcha... hope to see you in my blog.. take care!!..:)
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Date: 6/9/2012 2:08:00 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/8/2012 11:44:00 AM
I want to be where this poem is~ and see the tree cradle the moon. Lovely!
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Date: 6/8/2012 12:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win xx
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Date: 6/7/2012 9:44:00 PM
he he Kash, i love the whole winning image here..at your service....congrats...pd
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Date: 6/7/2012 8:45:00 PM
hey, did I never fave this one? I am going to go see. If not, I will do it because this is one of your best haiku ever. And congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/7/2012 2:35:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 6/7/2012 2:31:00 PM
Enjoyed again ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/7/2012 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the 181 contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2012 1:36:00 AM
I repeat... you're the master... Congrats... Terry
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Date: 6/2/2012 12:57:00 PM
Rare beauty is cradling the Moon, touching the evening breeze. Another superb one from your pen. Love and best wishes...Ravindra
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Date: 6/1/2012 6:37:00 PM
wowie, I LOVE this one. Is it brand new?? I have three pages of comments to get to now. wish me LUCK.
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Date: 6/1/2012 3:40:00 PM
Hey Kash, have seen this picture you have written so beautifully, took me back to my days in New Zealand. enjoyed.
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Date: 6/1/2012 1:32:00 PM
picturesque, kashi buddy.. thre you go.. woohoo.. more, more..:) hugggs!
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Date: 6/1/2012 6:09:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent writing this morning Kash. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2012 8:38:00 PM
an intense vision of perfect delight Kash.. have so missed your gifted pen my friend.. lovely view u provided tonight for me.. thankxx..luv..
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Date: 5/31/2012 4:06:00 PM
ah, very nice! love the last line!
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Date: 5/31/2012 1:25:00 PM
Love the imagery in this haiku, Kash. A wonderful write! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/31/2012 1:13:00 PM
Lovely like always "king Haiku" (like it or not) - smile :) oxox hug Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/31/2012 12:57:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku... you're the Master... Terry
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