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Evening Breeze

evening breeze---
a bent palm tree
cradling the moon



© kash poet  2012
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Placement:3rd ; (June 2012)

Contest:No.181.

Sponsor:Brian Strand

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Nette Onclaud

June 21, 2012 at 1:59 PM

and congrats big time!...:)

Nette Onclaud

June 21, 2012 at 1:58 PM

okie.. gotcha... hope to see you in my blog.. take care!!..:)

Joann Grisetti

June 9, 2012 at 2:08 PM

Beautiful. Congratulations on your win.

Carrie Richards

June 8, 2012 at 11:44 AM

I want to be where this poem is~ and see the tree cradle the moon. Lovely!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

June 8, 2012 at 12:54 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win xx

Poet Destroyer A

June 7, 2012 at 9:44 PM

he he Kash, i love the whole winning image here..at your service....congrats...pd

Andrea Dietrich

June 7, 2012 at 8:45 PM

hey, did I never fave this one? I am going to go see. If not, I will do it because this is one of your best haiku ever. And congrats on your win.

Sara Kendrick

June 7, 2012 at 2:35 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

June 7, 2012 at 2:31 PM

Enjoyed again ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 7, 2012 at 5:25 AM

Congratulations on your win in the 181 contest Kash. Love, Carol

Terry O'Leary

June 7, 2012 at 1:36 AM

I repeat... you're the master... Congrats... Terry

Ravindra K Kapoor

June 2, 2012 at 12:57 PM

Rare beauty is cradling the Moon, touching the evening breeze. Another superb one from your pen. Love and best wishes...Ravindra

Andrea Dietrich

June 1, 2012 at 6:37 PM

wowie, I LOVE this one. Is it brand new?? I have three pages of comments to get to now. wish me LUCK.

Harry Horsman

June 1, 2012 at 3:40 PM

Hey Kash, have seen this picture you have written so beautifully, took me back to my days in New Zealand. enjoyed.

Nette Onclaud

June 1, 2012 at 1:32 PM

picturesque, kashi buddy.. thre you go.. woohoo.. more, more..:) hugggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 1, 2012 at 6:09 AM

I have enjoyed reading your excellent writing this morning Kash. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love, Carol