Evening and Night

EVENING

Evening slipped out of the cave
Crossed the rock wall
And buried the city in soft kisses
Sun god‘s dripping soup
Gave her child a sunset glow
She went back to her cave
To sleep, to grow

NIGHT
Night birds on the prowl
Growl of dark panther
Unsteady footfalls of ghosts
Silhouetted trees
Cacophony of fledglings 
Snakes ripe with venoms
Green eyed owl preening feathers
Deep in jungles fairies play
Near a lake moon sneaks in
Embers of childhood
Smoldering in deep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Neels Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 7:56 AM
This is a beauty Rajat :) Hope your weekend is a brilliant one
Deschler Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 1:11 AM
There are so many things that go unseen in the dark. Some should be feared, some not... This is very interesting and enjoyable work, Rajat. Well done!
Richards Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 9:09 PM
Oh my, this is so lovely, giving the evening, and the night the sense of life itself, unfolding. So beautifully written !!
Bateman Avatar
December 20, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Rajat My Great Friend . . . I like this one immensely. The imagery and contrast you paint here between EVENING and NIGHT is so powerful and telling in every respect. A most deserved "7" from me and this one's in my FAV file too. Best Wishes from me and Ingrid to you and your family!! Merry Christmas!! Gary
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December 20, 2014 at 4:40 AM
Beautiful pen here Rajat! Truly enjoyed my very dear friend. A 7 for you! Have a wonderful weekend! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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