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Evenfall

crepuscular light 
nightfall and twilight gloaming 
fills the stars with dusk 


shimmering through the laurel
the cadence of a quiet evenfall
red violet hues of soft Auroral 
shimmering through the laurel 
the cadence of a quiet evenfall 
giving me shivers that enthrall 
shimmering through the laurel 
the cadence of a quiet evenfall

Sundown fantasies dipped in the artistry of a diamond jubilee 
centennial moments of grandeur, heaven is open to souls  
Rumi stars wrapped in skin, a roaming light that sinks within. 

Haiku//Triolet//Sijo.

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Paige Hind Date: 12/27/2023 5:54:00 PM Gorgeous writing, Mystic! It enchanted my mind. Especially loved the last line of the Sijo. Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 12/27/2023 12:24:00 PM Great use of the three forms, really loved the triolet, its a form I like a lot.. Great use imagery and rhymes and I think this will do well in the contest.. Best of luck.. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 12/27/2023 2:57:00 PM I have never done a triolet wasn't even sure I did it right lol, thanks for reading and taking an interest in my poem S O, God bless

Hiya Sharma Date: 12/27/2023 9:07:00 AM Oh my, such gorgeous imageries you've created in these forms, using ethereal colours whilst creating an eclectic flow of words.. "nightfall and twilight gloaming fills the stars with dusk" Magical scenes you've woven here which reflect the beauty of cosmos, along with conveying emotions.."red violet hues of soft Auroral shimmering through the laurel the cadence of a quiet evenfall" Gosh, so eloquent and exquisite, dear Rose.. "diamond jubilee", "Rumi stars wrapped in skin" Absolutely impeccable Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 12/27/2023 2:56:00 PM I so look forward to all your comments, you put so much time and effort into them, they draw out encouraged emotions in me, so thank you Hiya Hiya Sharma Date: 12/27/2023 9:08:00 AM It's difficult to choose a fav part from this poem but I really adore that sijo, it is deeply enriched with emotions.. A fav for me :) best of luck for the contest!