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Evenfall

crepuscular light nightfall and twilight gloaming fills the stars with dusk shimmering through the laurel the cadence of a quiet evenfall red violet hues of soft Auroral shimmering through the laurel the cadence of a quiet evenfall giving me shivers that enthrall shimmering through the laurel the cadence of a quiet evenfall Sundown fantasies dipped in the artistry of a diamond jubilee centennial moments of grandeur, heaven is open to souls Rumi stars wrapped in skin, a roaming light that sinks within. Haiku//Triolet//Sijo.

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Paige Hind

Date: 12/27/2023 5:54:00 PM

Gorgeous writing, Mystic! It enchanted my mind. Especially loved the last line of the Sijo.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/27/2023 4:10:00 PM

never attempted a triolet, but you've inspired me. Your imagery was outstanding, and the middle verse was brilliantly done. I also appreciate the 'Rumi' reference. Have to fave this one....enjoy your evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 12/27/2023 12:24:00 PM

Great use of the three forms, really loved the triolet, its a form I like a lot.. Great use imagery and rhymes and I think this will do well in the contest.. Best of luck..

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/27/2023 2:57:00 PM

I have never done a triolet wasn't even sure I did it right lol, thanks for reading and taking an interest in my poem S O, God bless

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/27/2023 9:07:00 AM

Oh my, such gorgeous imageries you've created in these forms, using ethereal colours whilst creating an eclectic flow of words.. "nightfall and twilight gloaming fills the stars with dusk" Magical scenes you've woven here which reflect the beauty of cosmos, along with conveying emotions.."red violet hues of soft Auroral shimmering through the laurel the cadence of a quiet evenfall" Gosh, so eloquent and exquisite, dear Rose.. "diamond jubilee", "Rumi stars wrapped in skin" Absolutely impeccable

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/27/2023 2:56:00 PM

I so look forward to all your comments, you put so much time and effort into them, they draw out encouraged emotions in me, so thank you Hiya

Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/27/2023 9:08:00 AM

It's difficult to choose a fav part from this poem but I really adore that sijo, it is deeply enriched with emotions.. A fav for me :) best of luck for the contest!