Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

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Evenfall

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 wrapped by stars 
            against dusk's glow,
                stillness
                    resides within:
                         breaths change into tunes
                           quiet...lull
                             as dew ~
                           on the brink
                        of moon,   
                   gods  arise    *
                with kismet
            in pure enchantment--
          when eventide cuddles
        me	  ````
     through meditation.

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   Pick-A-Title, Vol 17 - Yalto - Contest
 Sponsor: Edward Ibeh    5/18/2020

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Eve Roper May 22, 2020 at 2:07 AM Wow, I love this colorful and shape poem , Nette, congratulations on your well deserved win. Hugs Eve

Connie Marcum Wong May 20, 2020 at 3:18 PM Congratulations on your beautiful Yalto being in first place! Blessings xxoo

Sam Kauffman May 20, 2020 at 1:29 PM Just lovely, Nette. Your wording is so original and creative - "kismet," "eventide cuddles." Congratulations on your top placement! It seems you and I both love eventide and all that it evokes in us at the end of the day.

Aditi Mishra May 20, 2020 at 7:49 AM Beautiful imagery Nette. Congratulations on your top placement.

Kim Rodrigues May 20, 2020 at 7:36 AM You are spot on in imagery! Congratulations, Nette!

Edward Ibeh May 20, 2020 at 6:14 AM Congratulations on winning first place in my contest! This is an outstanding write, Nette!

Mystic Rose Rose May 18, 2020 at 2:52 PM Your poetry is enchanting today Nette, Hope your keeping well xo

Arturo Michael May 18, 2020 at 12:34 PM Sounds like you're going into a quiet state of mind...lovely imagery is taking you there...

Vijay Pandit May 18, 2020 at 11:40 AM Great imagery captured by your talented pen, Nette. All the best.

Tom Cunningham May 18, 2020 at 10:48 AM Lovely time of day captured well in your verse Nette, like the creative layout. Tom