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 wrapped by stars 
            against dusk's glow,
                stillness
                    resides within:
                         breaths change into tunes
                           quiet...lull
                             as dew ~
                           on the brink
                        of moon,   
                   gods  arise    *
                with kismet
            in pure enchantment--
          when eventide cuddles
        me	  ````
     through meditation.

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   Pick-A-Title, Vol 17 - Yalto - Contest
 Sponsor: Edward Ibeh    5/18/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/22/2020 2:07:00 AM
Wow, I love this colorful and shape poem , Nette, congratulations on your well deserved win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/20/2020 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful Yalto being in first place! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/20/2020 1:29:00 PM
Just lovely, Nette. Your wording is so original and creative - "kismet," "eventide cuddles." Congratulations on your top placement! It seems you and I both love eventide and all that it evokes in us at the end of the day.
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Date: 5/20/2020 7:49:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Nette. Congratulations on your top placement.
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Date: 5/20/2020 7:36:00 AM
You are spot on in imagery! Congratulations, Nette!
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Date: 5/20/2020 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on winning first place in my contest! This is an outstanding write, Nette!
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Date: 5/18/2020 2:52:00 PM
Your poetry is enchanting today Nette, Hope your keeping well xo
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Date: 5/18/2020 12:34:00 PM
Sounds like you're going into a quiet state of mind...lovely imagery is taking you there...
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Date: 5/18/2020 11:40:00 AM
Great imagery captured by your talented pen, Nette. All the best.
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Date: 5/18/2020 10:48:00 AM
Lovely time of day captured well in your verse Nette, like the creative layout. Tom
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