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Evenfall

In my sky stale sun slinks slow, blazing still life’s stalled time, slinging like dark cloud, casts pensive shadow on dim day, destined to find soon the night fall through the twilight shroud. With hope to see stars shine I wait at edge of dusk.
May 13, 2020 Syllable count : 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 Contest : Pick-A-Title, Vol 17-Yalto Sponsor : Edward Ibeh

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Date: 5/22/2020 2:10:00 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/20/2020 3:20:00 PM
Beautiful Subimal! Congratulations on your deserving first placement! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/20/2020 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations Sublimal. Your imagery is always superb and it shines through your delightful alliteration. Your ending line is a perfect conclusion to your journey at the end of the day.
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Date: 5/20/2020 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. The imagery is beautiful!
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Date: 5/20/2020 7:40:00 AM
Love the last two line! I can see you standing there. Congratulations, Subimal!
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Date: 5/20/2020 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on winning first place in my contest, Subimal:-) Your poem is fantastic!
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Date: 5/14/2020 5:51:00 PM
Hi Submal: Very well done!' I entered as well.
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