Evenfall

In my sky stale sun slinks slow, blazing still life’s stalled time, slinging like dark cloud, casts pensive shadow on dim day, destined to find soon the night fall through the twilight shroud. With hope to see stars shine I wait at edge of dusk.
May 13, 2020 Syllable count : 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 Contest : Pick-A-Title, Vol 17-Yalto Sponsor : Edward Ibeh
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Roper Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 2:10 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 3:20 PM
Beautiful Subimal! Congratulations on your deserving first placement! Blessings xxoo
Kauffman Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 1:51 PM
Congratulations Sublimal. Your imagery is always superb and it shines through your delightful alliteration. Your ending line is a perfect conclusion to your journey at the end of the day.
Mishra Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. The imagery is beautiful!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 7:40 AM
Love the last two line! I can see you standing there. Congratulations, Subimal!
Ibeh Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 6:21 AM
Congratulations on winning first place in my contest, Subimal:-) Your poem is fantastic!
Sergi Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 5:51 PM
Hi Submal: Very well done!' I entered as well.
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