Evenfall

Lilac dreams tiptoe inside whisper my secrets as evenfall descends.. Aged stories turn mauve haunt me then dissolve in tides of crimson seas.. Memories expand become more mine than I am as evenfall ends. May 9,2020 BRIAN'S CHOICE R,any form,any theme Contest Winner: 2nd Place

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Jcb Brul

Date: 6/26/2020 8:36:00 PM

Breathtakingly beautiful, dear Aditi!!! Your words reverberate like an echo of a favorite song. A fave!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/27/2020 1:33:00 AM

Thank you for the fave. I am so glad you took your time to visit this muse and find beauty in my words. It really means a lot! Blessings and love :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 5/24/2020 7:22:00 AM

This is one of the wonderful Yaltos that didn't make the cut in my contest, but I'm thrilled to see you place high in Brian's, Aditi:-) Have a blessed Memorial Day!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 5/24/2020 7:56:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Edward! I enjoyed writing in Yalto form. Your contests with the thought provoking themes give a wonderful insight into poetic thoughts to be explored. God bless you :)