Even the Angels Wept

Even the angels wept

A mother touched his cherub cheek
Trying to feel his heart beat weak
Crying softly as he slept
Oh and how the angles wept 

The father watched each monitors peak
Mesmerized in electronic mystique
But the rise and fall were all inept
And again the angels wept

Grandma waiting for the babe to peek
Too heartbroken to even speak
Golden curls on his forehead swept
I tell you now, the angles wept

A nurse comes in for an IV tweak,
She tells the room, the chance is bleak.
But still the family, hope they kept
Wishing the angles had not wept

The father freezes, and the mother shrieks
It said the words no one could speak
Not a breath could they detect
In heaven, Oh! The angels wept

A tiny coffin made of teak
Ebony satin, soft and sleek
For his body, to protect 
And even the angels wept

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/9/2016 6:34:00 AM
Wonderful write....
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Date: 5/5/2016 6:52:00 PM
Absolutely breathtaking. A song of heartache and loss. God bless you Amber
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