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Even Sky Cries Too

Gazed at the sky, was about to rain; blood flew down my vein, sudden thought strikes my brain, is it just a rain? or something sky couldn't attain, so showering its pain.... soon sky began to cry, shedding tear; and sudden thunder sound I hear, as if something its heart can't bear, my veins choked with fear, as if it was trying to say something; but not clear, I sped up the gear, reached the safest place near....... soon lightening strikes loud, black clouds in the sky crowd, celebrating their victory and feeling proud, every other activity disallowed, sky not able to bear, cries aloud; my heart started pumping unnaturally loud.... oh dear sky, don't shed tears as rain, your tears are pure and plain, mine are salty and full of pain, don't just let them go in vain, don't know what to lose and what to attain?? might be a new beginning, but don't know from where to began; just keep faith in God, he's there listening your pain........ sudden belief in God works, black clouds felt sudden jerks, something rising, sky rejoice; as if someone heard its voice, birds flew singing voice, black devils left with no choice, they being forced to depart, I felt happiness in my heart, as if bulls eye hit by a dart, then I realized God's art.... sky was clear, glittering with sunshine, as if comes true a desire of mine, indicating towards a particular sign, leaving behind an art of seven colored design, now the true victory inclines....... sky got what it desire, but my problems were more prior, I m feeling sad for me entire, no worries I'll achieve what I want to acquire, because God is there; too seeing me crier, my dedication and hard work will make me rise higher n higher.

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Date: 9/30/2024 9:51:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed."
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Date: 2/22/2016 11:28:00 PM
Nitin, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2015 10:32:00 PM
NS, enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
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Date: 8/30/2011 10:03:00 PM
Nitin, Congratulations on your HM. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/29/2011 10:20:00 PM
Congrats Nitin on your win ....
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Date: 8/29/2011 9:05:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Nitin
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Date: 8/29/2011 6:40:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/29/2011 1:33:00 PM
hey Nitin, congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/29/2011 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in John Moses Freeman's "Natural and Beyond" contest Nitin. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/28/2011 11:57:00 PM
Congrats Nittin on your HM in contest luv..
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