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Even If Man’s Blind

Descending s p l a s h infuses brook. Falling from on high, cockcrow skies. E a r l y risers, on boat, take l o o k. O bittersweet g r a c e …angels’ sighs. P a i n t e d hues, (God never forsook the human race) the bright dawn highs. Passionate-red, the orb’s e y e wise. Even if man’s blind, still God dyes Yellow-orange, sunny s u n r i s e.

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Joseph May

Date: 6/19/2025 5:55:00 AM

Nicely written Kim, best wishes

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2025 7:55:00 AM

Thank you, Joe!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/19/2025 2:01:00 AM

You make me sigh reading this poem. Excellent as usual. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2025 5:24:00 AM

Thank you, dear one!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/18/2025 6:34:00 PM

Exquisitely attractive, Paige. The hues displayed by the divine exude from your poem

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2025 5:24:00 AM

Thank you ~ Kim ;)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/18/2025 6:22:00 PM

' Even if man’s blind, still God dyes Yellow-orange, sunny s u n r i s e. ' Yes, He does. Those that are unable to S E E God's beauty, are able to enjoy His blessings in other ways. Your thoughts touch my heart. This is so beautifully written and presented, Kim. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2025 5:24:00 AM

Thanj you, sweet Brandy! Hugs

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 6/18/2025 5:49:00 PM

Tremendous Kim. The colors created by God leap out of your poem

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2025 5:25:00 AM

Thank you so much!

Paige Hind

Date: 6/18/2025 5:25:00 PM

Absolutely gorgeous. It made my day, as some poems can do. Made me "look" around.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2025 5:27:00 AM

Aww, that is the best, Paige! Idf we take the time to look up and around! My young grand, one time, was on his phone while his mom was looking around a thrift store. A little girl was taking off her clothes and running around. I told him that he might want to look up from his phone sometime…lol! What is going on around us as we stay buried in technology.

Sara Baker

Date: 6/18/2025 2:12:00 PM

such beautiful imagery, Kim! I took delight in these words: P a i n t e d hues, (God never forsook the human race) the bright dawn highs. Passionate-red, the orb’s e y e wise. Appreciate your creative voice; enjoy your evening, yellow rose

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2025 5:27:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Yellow Rose!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/18/2025 1:45:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your Lovely "Even If Man’s Blind" write. Love your great ending. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away.............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2025 5:29:00 AM

So glad you enjoyed the ending. This started out as a triolet and was rearranged and played with. Have a blessed day, dear Paula!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2025 12:22:00 PM

- One can never get tired of enjoying the colors of nature... a sunrise or sunset is magical... lovely written, Kim :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/19/2025 5:30:00 AM

I so agree! Sometimes those wonderful colors are captured in a painting! God bless!