Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

Even If Man’s Blind

Descending  s p l a s h  infuses brook.
Falling from on high, cockcrow skies.
E a r l y  risers, on boat, take  l o o k.
O bittersweet  g r a c e …angels’ sighs.
P a i n t e d  hues, (God never forsook
the human race) the bright dawn highs.
Passionate-red, the orb’s  e y e  wise.
Even if man’s blind, still God dyes
Yellow-orange, sunny  s u n r i s e.

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Joseph May June 19, 2025 at 5:55 AM Nicely written Kim, best wishes Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2025 at 7:55 AM Thank you, Joe!

Victor Buhagiar June 19, 2025 at 2:01 AM You make me sigh reading this poem. Excellent as usual. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2025 at 5:24 AM Thank you, dear one!

Sotto Poet June 18, 2025 at 6:34 PM Exquisitely attractive, Paige. The hues displayed by the divine exude from your poem Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2025 at 5:24 AM Thank you ~ Kim ;)

Brandy Nicole June 18, 2025 at 6:22 PM ' Even if man’s blind, still God dyes Yellow-orange, sunny s u n r i s e. ' Yes, He does. Those that are unable to S E E God's beauty, are able to enjoy His blessings in other ways. Your thoughts touch my heart. This is so beautifully written and presented, Kim. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2025 at 5:24 AM Thanj you, sweet Brandy! Hugs

Oliver Mckeithan June 18, 2025 at 5:49 PM Tremendous Kim. The colors created by God leap out of your poem Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2025 at 5:25 AM Thank you so much!

Paige Hind June 18, 2025 at 5:25 PM Absolutely gorgeous. It made my day, as some poems can do. Made me "look" around. Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2025 at 5:27 AM Aww, that is the best, Paige! Idf we take the time to look up and around! My young grand, one time, was on his phone while his mom was looking around a thrift store. A little girl was taking off her clothes and running around. I told him that he might want to look up from his phone sometime…lol! What is going on around us as we stay buried in technology.

sara Etgen-Baker June 18, 2025 at 2:12 PM such beautiful imagery, Kim! I took delight in these words: P a i n t e d hues, (God never forsook the human race) the bright dawn highs. Passionate-red, the orb’s e y e wise. Appreciate your creative voice; enjoy your evening, yellow rose Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2025 at 5:27 AM Thank you so much, dear Yellow Rose!

Paula Goldsmith June 18, 2025 at 1:45 PM I enjoyed reading your Lovely "Even If Man’s Blind" write. Love your great ending. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away............. Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2025 at 5:29 AM So glad you enjoyed the ending. This started out as a triolet and was rearranged and played with. Have a blessed day, dear Paula!

Anne-Lise Andresen June 18, 2025 at 12:22 PM - One can never get tired of enjoying the colors of nature... a sunrise or sunset is magical... lovely written, Kim :) - hugs Kim Rodrigues June 19, 2025 at 5:30 AM I so agree! Sometimes those wonderful colors are captured in a painting! God bless!