Eve

I ate from the tree of Eden From the tree that is forbidden I bit from the core of evil I tasted sin that had been hidden I ate from the tree of Eden From the tree of right and wrong I feel the power that it comes with This is where I belong I ate from the tree of Eden From the tree of life and death I swallowed down the apple I could taste it on my breath I ate from the tree of Eden The devils home away from hell I ate from the tree of Eden Cause its human nature to rebel

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/3/2010 7:26:00 AM

Enjoyed reading today... hope you are well. Welcome to the soup.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/3/2010 6:56:00 AM

Your poem has quite a lyrical, rhyming and rhythmic qualities, enjoyed your poem, Nothing

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/3/2010 6:37:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Nothing. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/3/2010 4:50:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry today with its very creative theme on Eve... hope u enjoy your time on the Soup and will check out the contest page offered to members... good luck with luv..

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/3/2010 3:06:00 AM

Creatures born of freewill, true it is our nature to rebel. Excellent write I enjoyed the repeating line at the beginning of each stanza.