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Eve

From Adam's ribs, she's given life Then sooner she became his wife She gave him joy and happiness She filled his deepest emptiness She was his faithful companion Together they shared dominion He was the king, she was the queen She was gorgeous, she's evergreen But one day, the tricky devil Enticed her heart to do evil Her one mistake roused the reason That they were charged of high treason 2nd place

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Date: 7/5/2023 6:54:00 AM
Congrats on your poem of Eve, and 2nd place. Very well done.
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 7/5/2023 6:01:00 PM
Thank you very much...
Date: 7/4/2023 8:57:00 PM
A great portrayal of Eve, Roger! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 7/4/2023 8:58:00 PM
Thank you very much...
Date: 7/3/2023 12:57:00 AM
A great illustration of Eve, the mother of humanity. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 7/3/2023 4:05:00 AM
Thank you very much...
Date: 7/2/2023 11:51:00 PM
Wonderful entry, Roger, congratulations:)
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 7/3/2023 4:06:00 AM
Thank you very much... It's an honor...

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