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Eve

Adam was content to stay
where flowers bloomed every day.
And for an infinite span,
God sated the soul of Man.

Yet Man lacked self-awareness,
and God saw that unfairness.
A woman's daring was sought
to give Man free will of thought.

So Eve gave birth to reason;
and thought came into season.
Though Man found sin in her deed,
thanks to Eve, His soul was freed.

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Kim Merryman Date: 7/4/2023 9:17:00 PM A creative look at Eve! Congrats on your win, Emile! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 7/5/2023 8:29:00 AM Thanks, Kim, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Christuraj Alex Date: 7/3/2023 1:09:00 AM Eve gave birth to reason. Indeed, is a unique concept. Beautiful writing. Congratulations! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 7/3/2023 7:22:00 AM Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Joanna Daniel Date: 7/3/2023 12:29:00 AM Wonderful rendition of Adam and Eve story, Emile, congratulations:) Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 7/3/2023 7:22:00 AM Thanks, Joanna, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/14/2023 11:31:00 AM Hello Emile, I enjoyed this poetry of Eve. My friend Emile. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\ Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/14/2023 2:26:00 PM Hello Emile, I agree with you. She should be celebrated not demonized. My friend enjoy your evening ./Darlene/ Emile Pinet Date: 6/14/2023 2:10:00 PM Thanks, Darlene; I think Eve should be celebrated, not demonized. I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.