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Adam was content to stay where flowers bloomed every day. And for an infinite span, God sated the soul of Man. Yet Man lacked self-awareness, and God saw that unfairness. A woman's daring was sought to give Man free will of thought. So Eve gave birth to reason; and thought came into season. Though Man found sin in her deed, thanks to Eve, His soul was freed.

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Date: 7/4/2023 9:17:00 PM
A creative look at Eve! Congrats on your win, Emile! Blessings, Kim M
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/5/2023 8:29:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/3/2023 1:09:00 AM
Eve gave birth to reason. Indeed, is a unique concept. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/3/2023 7:22:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/3/2023 12:29:00 AM
Wonderful rendition of Adam and Eve story, Emile, congratulations:)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/3/2023 7:22:00 AM
Thanks, Joanna, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/14/2023 11:31:00 AM
Hello Emile, I enjoyed this poetry of Eve. My friend Emile. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/14/2023 2:26:00 PM
Hello Emile, I agree with you. She should be celebrated not demonized. My friend enjoy your evening ./Darlene/
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/14/2023 2:10:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene; I think Eve should be celebrated, not demonized. I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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