Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Shape

Evaporation

The
            
                         sky 

          was
     
                    the 
                     
                                          limit

                                     and
                      
                                                          we
                                
                                            broke 


                                    it.


                                              O

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CayCay Godwin August 18, 2026 at 7:30 AM LOVE IT! Reading below prompted me to share that I found the O to mean 'oops.' I like and think it's cool knowing how different people interpret something when left open for same. Fun Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 26, 2026 at 8:24 AM Yes, our poetry, our art, it has a life of its own when we put it out there. Thank you and love and hugs xomo!

David Kavanagh August 13, 2026 at 11:37 AM Could that O at the end prefix the zone, we did break it once already Maureen, no doubt it’s in danger again or will be soon enough, thought provoking piece, and a nice shape too, cheers David! oh captcha 353 not quite 360 but close enough 🤫 Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 26, 2026 at 8:22 AM Thank you, our O our everything. Cheers dears! xomo

Laurentine G August 11, 2026 at 9:40 AM That little "O" at the end makes me think of an open mouthed expression, then into pensiveness - evaporation is sad but the hydrologic cycle creates another opportunity, I suppose the sky is only the limit if you don't use eternity as a measure 🥰 Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 12, 2026 at 7:21 AM Love your read on my O, feelings conveyed! The only constant is change, oh, our little brains have a lot to handle ;) xomo

Kim Rodrigues August 11, 2026 at 7:24 AM Well done. Sad one. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 26, 2026 at 8:25 AM Thank you Lovely! xomo