Evanescing In the Night

Hand touched your face between the mist
                                                         Vanishing as air in the cold




                                                                   November 11, 2016
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Daniel Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 6:18 AM
A very lovely crystalline, Nayda:) should do well in the contest:) a 7:)
Negron Flores Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 6:45 AM
Thank you Jo
Warrior Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 9:07 PM
A beautifully clear and crystalline verse Nayda...good luck and god bless...^WW^
Negron Flores Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 9:30 PM
Thank you very much. God bless you.
Gupta Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:49 PM
Soft surreal touch ... Very nice ...
Negron Flores Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:26 PM
Thank you Probir
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