Evaluations

EVALUATIONS

out
  of sight
lapsed
  into
obscurity
unfashionable
   unremembered
still noble

belatedly
repurposed
so
sensitive
  &compelling
thisss
persuasive
tension
    presenting
impressions
 in masterly
conformity
 with
 cumulative
&disruptive
force
steadily
 enriching
&
 deepening
understanding

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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