Eva So Fine

EVA SO FINE

I met Eva,
a flowered summer dress she wore
and she was looking so fine..

a brief compliment,
as time inst on my side...
says shes going west..
western suburbs..

i posed whether shes going..
to look for work or to look....
look for men..
she smiles shyly and..
ever so lightly punches me...

we leave promising to meet again..
for were best of buddies...
or is it best of friends.
Eva was looking fine..
and shes going ..
going to the western suburbs..


lewis k Nyaga
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nyaga Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 4:57 AM
Thanks dear glad you relate with the story**** blessings Lewis
Hunjeri Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 4:16 PM
Dude, am familiar with that story sooooooo well......
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