Ethereal Words

Written: April 05, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Whispers, as tongues, do speak. I've become entangled in this show In a world where darkness seek Betwixt the radiant melody's glow, An obscuring veil of a single syllable. Oh, an aged tree with a soul of willable An event witnessed throughout history. Control appears as decades of consistory. Whispers with subtle, loving elegance. Carried by the wind embrace. Myths unravel, secrets lack eloquence  In the ethereal sphere of space. Roots, akin to tendrils, intertwine, Binding us to a shared lineage divine. They reach deep into the earth's embrace, Connecting us to a joint past's grace. Weaving our futures, intertwined, A tapestry of dreams, combined. Threads of hope and love, entwined, In this cosmic dance, we find.
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Beaufort Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 10:51 AM
SP, this creates a bit of background noise that radiates thru our universe...almost like that left over from the Big Bang...but on a human and spiritual level. You have a great ability to make our connection to each other seem beautiful. Your words are a very high art form! Makes me smile!
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 11:59 AM
Sotto, this is brilliant as usual. Probably, we all meet together dancing in the cosmos. Probably we are more attached than we think. Who knows?. This is a clever thinking or point of view. For sure is awesome. Thank you for your inspiration. Blessings!
Narain Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 11:04 AM
A poem full of hope and dreams. Well penned.
One Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 8:54 AM
Hey Sotto, your ink masterfully crafts a variety of imagery and metaphors that invites readers to contemplate the profound significance of whispers and their impact on our shared human experience. The poem begins with a recognition of the power of whispers, likening them to tongues that speak in subtle yet profound ways. Great work..
Kendrick Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 4:11 AM
Our futures are intertwined be it for good or bad. Our world is affected by what happens across the ocean just as much so as what happens here. If only love could abound all across the world. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2024 at 2:05 AM
- A deep poem, Las ... let's hope that the threads bind us together and never give up hope and love :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs
Hamilton Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 5:39 PM
Love this Sotto full of hope and dreams love shines through too one of your best hugs Shadow
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