Ethereal Plane

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Ethereal plane decides fate Prior soul agreement Upon earth, let not love abate We’re soul luminescent Fall from grace, no disgrace See God now, face to face Cave of heart, sacred place Free from karmic chain Ethereal plane 21-October-2021 Quietus

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/23/2021 2:07:00 AM

If we all recognized this, we would be so much nicer to each other, because we would understand that we are all a piece of each other "Prior soul agreement" Loved it! You may be opening souls.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/23/2021 6:37:00 AM

Soul decides the experience it needs, then we play out the role here on earth, oblivious to our true nature

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2021 2:19:00 PM

I enjoyed reviewing your form again by looking at this one. This should help me "get it" this time. I think this form is amazingly unique. Is it not recognized as new form by Soup? It really ought to be. Have you submitted it for their review?

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/21/2021 6:44:00 PM

PS is not accepting submissions for new poetry forms, it seems. Doesn’t matter. I’ve written hundreds of them by now and am enjoying it!