Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Ethereal Plane

Ethereal plane decides fate
Prior soul agreement
Upon earth, let not love abate
We’re soul luminescent 

Fall from grace, no disgrace
See God now, face to face
Cave of heart, sacred place

Free from karmic chain
Ethereal plane

21-October-2021
Quietus 

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Caren Krutsinger October 23, 2021 at 2:07 AM If we all recognized this, we would be so much nicer to each other, because we would understand that we are all a piece of each other "Prior soul agreement" Loved it! You may be opening souls. Unseeking Seeker October 23, 2021 at 6:37 AM Soul decides the experience it needs, then we play out the role here on earth, oblivious to our true nature

Andrea Dietrich October 21, 2021 at 2:19 PM I enjoyed reviewing your form again by looking at this one. This should help me "get it" this time. I think this form is amazingly unique. Is it not recognized as new form by Soup? It really ought to be. Have you submitted it for their review? Unseeking Seeker October 21, 2021 at 6:44 PM PS is not accepting submissions for new poetry forms, it seems. Doesn’t matter. I’ve written hundreds of them by now and am enjoying it!