Eternity's Breeze

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" ETERNITY'S BREEZE " MY PHOTO, ©

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I stand on life's snow-covered summit, and my soul feels the divine breeze of eternity! © Demetrios Trifiatis 07 November 2018

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/6/2018 1:36:00 PM

Hello Demetrios, The snow on the mountain top is so beautiful to see. It does feel like eternity. have a nice day my friend.

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/30/2018 6:50:00 PM

Hello Demetrios, I really like your Monoku here!! Your fourteen words and the picture you've crafted with theme -- say it all!! Beautiful, Sensitive, and Quite Wondrous!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/7/2018 8:03:00 AM

- When you look at this picture ... I can understand this feeling ... possible to imagine that "magic things" could happen ... who knows ... (?) - as you say: divine breeze of eternity - nobody knows what is behind "the mountains" ... - A beautiful and sensitive poem, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/7/2018 11:26:00 AM

I think this picture reminds you of your country my dearest, friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much for your wonderful visit and comment! Hugs xxx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/7/2018 6:08:00 AM

Very peaceful and divine.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/7/2018 6:31:00 AM

Thank you so much for your gracious visit and lovely comment dearest friend, Vijay!

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 11/7/2018 3:38:00 AM

What a metaphor! Winter age! You stand, in humility, taking pride in the wealth of a soul always looking up to the summit seeking Divine Grace and Beauty! Good morning dear Demetrios, thank you for sharing your genuine and profound thoughts that elevate your avid reader soul.. A great Monoku! A gem and a FAV. My deepest regards.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/7/2018 6:28:00 AM

A hymn to my humble Monoku dearest, Besma! Thank you very much for your profound analysis which may help others to see beyond the horizon of my humble Monoku! God bless you! Thank you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/7/2018 3:14:00 AM

A lovely image to start the day Demetrios. Tom.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/7/2018 6:25:00 AM

I know you understand me dearest, Tom since you are on the summit next to mine! Thank you!