Eternity's Breeze

I stand on life's snow-covered summit, and my soul feels the divine breeze of eternity!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
    07 November 2018

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Darlene De Beaulieu

December 6, 2018 at 1:36 PM

Hello Demetrios, The snow on the mountain top is so beautiful to see. It does feel like eternity. have a nice day my friend.

Gary Bateman

November 30, 2018 at 6:50 PM

Hello Demetrios, I really like your Monoku here!! Your fourteen words and the picture you've crafted with theme -- say it all!! Beautiful, Sensitive, and Quite Wondrous!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 7, 2018 at 8:03 AM

- When you look at this picture ... I can understand this feeling ... possible to imagine that "magic things" could happen ... who knows ... (?) - as you say: divine breeze of eternity - nobody knows what is behind "the mountains" ... - A beautiful and sensitive poem, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 7, 2018 at 11:26 AM

I think this picture reminds you of your country my dearest, friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much for your wonderful visit and comment! Hugs xxx

Vijay Pandit

November 7, 2018 at 6:08 AM

Very peaceful and divine.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 7, 2018 at 6:31 AM

Thank you so much for your gracious visit and lovely comment dearest friend, Vijay!

Besma Riabi Dziri

November 7, 2018 at 3:38 AM

What a metaphor! Winter age! You stand, in humility, taking pride in the wealth of a soul always looking up to the summit seeking Divine Grace and Beauty! Good morning dear Demetrios, thank you for sharing your genuine and profound thoughts that elevate your avid reader soul.. A great Monoku! A gem and a FAV. My deepest regards.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 7, 2018 at 6:28 AM

A hymn to my humble Monoku dearest, Besma! Thank you very much for your profound analysis which may help others to see beyond the horizon of my humble Monoku! God bless you! Thank you!