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Eternity Calls

Around me i see, it's all the same, so many are gone, there's no more flame. As eternity calls, she adds to your stress, to drag you down, to give you less. Their faces I see, hold on to it's ware, all struggles are over, no more to bare. When it's all over, lights angels arrive, to take you home, this world you survived.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/14/2012 4:44:00 PM
Hi John , came back to read this one again .It's one of my favourites. Hope you are happy. Your friend Anne
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Date: 4/19/2012 11:29:00 AM
Stopping by to say Thank You for your kind comments on my poetry. It is a pleasure to read your writings. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:41:00 AM
dude, Your poetic progression is evident in this piece! I diGG the layout, message, meter ECT!
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Date: 12/6/2011 2:25:00 PM
thanks,,,,your replies are appreciated....
Date: 12/5/2011 5:34:00 PM
This world is getting harder to survive. Thank goodness we have poetry to drown ourselves in. Love the gentle message you pack in this one John. Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 12/3/2011 9:10:00 AM
John, i can relate to giving my x-stress...lol... and it' always falls out the same.. I don't know if I fear death.. at times that is all i want.. but, than when i look around and see all that is around.. it makes me think... hey! "I WANT TO SURVIE ALL THIS BULL$H!T AGAIN...""' LOL..~ I'm kidding,,, your words always hitssss notes with me.. Honestly, i don't want it to be over..my life has not begun.. not yet ;-)~ p.d.
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Date: 12/3/2011 5:02:00 AM
We survive John, just not the way it was . For those that have gone it's is peace for them that in go good standing with our Lord. Wonderful poem !!!
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Date: 11/30/2011 6:11:00 PM
lovely rhyme
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Date: 11/30/2011 1:50:00 PM
Nice write! You have alot of heartfelt writes.. Keep them flowing..Oh! Thanks for all the comments on my works.Very much appreciated.
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Date: 11/30/2011 1:42:00 PM
Sweeeeet! My 12 yr old likes this one too. There is something sooo soothing about the angels' light taking me home....goosebumps big time! My struggles aren't that difficult but on my worst days I do think along this line! Enjoyed, Aaron. Gwendolen
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Date: 11/29/2011 11:03:00 PM
Well, it beats Avon calling, Aaron. I enjoyed this. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/29/2011 10:14:00 PM
Death seems to influence everyone in profound ways. We get upset when other people enter eternity, yet it's a solemn moment when it comes for us. It's the natural progression of life, which you should enjoy every minute of, taking the good with the bad as the inherent joy of living. Anyway, intriguing poem, good job with this one.   -KMD
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