Eternity

This love grows with every word we say Just to think our weddding is coming some day We cherrish every moment together You make my day feel better Words can't explain the emotions I feel when I'm with you When that day comes I hope you say "I Do."

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Serenity D'Nae Montgomery

Date: 1/13/2009 8:35:00 AM

Wow.... People actually feel the way I do.. ur an amazing poet.. Keep it up gurl!! Love always, Serenity

David Gray

Date: 12/29/2008 9:13:00 AM

I think i'm drugged.. why?

David Gray

Date: 12/29/2008 9:09:00 AM

When arent you on? Nice poem..

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/28/2008 8:09:00 PM

Nice poem Alexz, The form is a couplet. The thought of love growing with every word is nicely said. I hope you have a Happy and Safe New Year...Raul

John Heck

Date: 12/28/2008 2:42:00 PM

I like the brighter side of your poetry...such as this sentimental verse - your words sing sweetly and warms the reader's heart...very nice, Alexz. Wishing you tons of happiness, fun and BIG smiles come 2009! Peace always, John

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/28/2008 2:06:00 PM

i like john he holds no punches, beatiful poem and you got off and just wrote it fast.

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/28/2008 1:24:00 PM

how can i explaine this style of poetry in one word; oh yes, "sappy". how can you be sure she won't say "i won't" john

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/28/2008 1:21:00 PM

This is so sweet alexz! :), but do you really think you'll get married, you're 16... but whatever, this was a wonderful write I liked it. ~Michaela~

Matt Lirette

Date: 12/28/2008 1:18:00 PM

dont worry baby. i will.