Eternity

This love grows with every word we say
Just to think our weddding is coming some day
We cherrish every moment together
You make my day feel better
Words can't explain the emotions I feel when I'm with you
When that day comes I hope you say "I Do."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Montgomery Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 8:35 AM
Wow.... People actually feel the way I do.. ur an amazing poet.. Keep it up gurl!! Love always, Serenity
Gray Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 9:13 AM
I think i'm drugged.. why?
Gray Avatar
December 29, 2008 at 9:09 AM
When arent you on? Nice poem..
Moreno Avatar
December 28, 2008 at 8:09 PM
Nice poem Alexz, The form is a couplet. The thought of love growing with every word is nicely said. I hope you have a Happy and Safe New Year...Raul
Heck Avatar
December 28, 2008 at 2:42 PM
I like the brighter side of your poetry...such as this sentimental verse - your words sing sweetly and warms the reader's heart...very nice, Alexz. Wishing you tons of happiness, fun and BIG smiles come 2009! Peace always, John
Burton Avatar
December 28, 2008 at 2:06 PM
i like john he holds no punches, beatiful poem and you got off and just wrote it fast.
Loving Iii Avatar
December 28, 2008 at 1:24 PM
how can i explaine this style of poetry in one word; oh yes, "sappy". how can you be sure she won't say "i won't" john
Payne Avatar
December 28, 2008 at 1:21 PM
This is so sweet alexz! :), but do you really think you'll get married, you're 16... but whatever, this was a wonderful write I liked it. ~Michaela~
Lirette Avatar
December 28, 2008 at 1:18 PM
dont worry baby. i will.
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