Eternity

puffy summer clouds
float across eternity
so high birds can't fly

allusionanalogyappreciationbeautynaturehaiku

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Sara Kendrick

March 13, 2022 at 4:05 AM

Good one. There is the heaven that is made for the birds of the air, and they can only go so high. Man, however, has gone beyond and has sent spaceships with cameras even farther. Sometimes I wonder what the outcome will be. Your visit to my page with congrats was encouraging. Sara