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Eternity

Death

Earth

Heaven

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CayCay Godwin

April 10, 2020 at 12:43 AM

I'm sure it is only until we get it right that we live in the flesh over and again - then in the galaxy and onto infinity we shine for eternity, but you didn't ask me to be chatty with my views! This is most profound, probably as profound as four words can be - I'm trying to tell you that I like it! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Shirley Hawkins

April 10, 2020 at 1:09 AM

Please don't apologize for the chat I am dumbfounded by your comments and your understanding of my poem. PS and the comments I receive from other poets who write so eloquently help me enormously to keep on scribbling. So very pleased you liked it, thank you for taking the time to read it....Take Care...Shirley