Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Eternally

The purple lines of mid-evening 
Announces that lush of Starlight, 
Will be arriving soon from behind
 As fluff of clouds sweep the winds . 
In a starry blink of a landscape 
Which partially hides her face 
Full of style and lilting glory; 
And In her court are a thousand gems
 Sharing their heavenly light;  a deep fervor
To twinkle through the heavens 
With a lovely dazzling vision, 
While I relish this bright affection 
My feet rush to find my place 
Cuddling this iridescent glimpse of love


Poem On Love- New Or Old
Sponsor: Lu Loo
Pre-written  Submitted 3/11/2019



6/14/2014

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Line Gauthier March 12, 2019 at 10:47 AM Congrats on your win, nette.

Kelly Deschler January 21, 2015 at 1:48 AM Your poetry is always so enchanting and so beautifully expressed. You are truly gifted, Nette... Congrats on winning first place with this heartfelt write!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 18, 2015 at 3:28 AM COngratulations NEtte.. :)! I truly enjoyed the second stanza.. :)! much deserved.. :) weeeee! galing galing.. :)! musta?

Kayod5 Kayode January 18, 2015 at 12:40 AM Truly romantic,congrats on the win nette...huggs

Ralph Sergi January 17, 2015 at 5:46 PM Hi Nette, Congratulations! beautiful prose. "Yonder the tickled moon, near plm tree nest. Sounds like my Florida at night.

Paul Callus January 17, 2015 at 2:43 PM Wow! You whirl and twirl in romantic bliss, Nette! Congratulations on this lovely win...much deserved. #7 Have a nice weekend. // paul

Connie Marcum Wong January 17, 2015 at 12:47 PM Congratulations on this romantic entry taking top honors Nette!

Jan Allison January 17, 2015 at 12:41 PM Oh so beautiful Nette - Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne January 17, 2015 at 10:04 AM Congratulations on your well deserved top of the list first place win.

Maurice Yvonne January 17, 2015 at 10:02 AM Rhonda had a great eye on this choice. You knocked me out with this one nette. A Fav!

Sandra Haight January 17, 2015 at 8:58 AM Very beautiful, Nette. Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra

John Lawless January 17, 2015 at 6:14 AM WOW, Nette, this one had me "puckering up" in hope of catching a hint of the kiss on the wind. Well deserved top placement. A definite 7+++++

Dr.Ram Mehta January 17, 2015 at 4:24 AM Great romantic expressions, congrats on the win, nette

Casarah Nance June 30, 2014 at 9:22 AM Beautiful, grats on your win :)

Kelly Deschler June 29, 2014 at 6:56 PM You have written so beautifully of those moments spent, suspended in sweet romance. Wonderful work, Nette! Congratulations on your win!

John Lawless June 29, 2014 at 6:27 PM This poem is a sweet embrace of the night and its promise. Intriguing and seductive.

Mike Bayles June 17, 2014 at 11:24 AM I enjoy the rhyme and flow of this poem.

Robert Lindley June 17, 2014 at 10:06 AM This my friend is a winner. It is to me as I will now add this gem to my fav list!!! BBravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mustapha Mohammed June 17, 2014 at 7:18 AM What a beautiful work of art Nette. Loved it from start to finish.

Carl Fraser June 16, 2014 at 1:50 AM Magnificant Nette, very well expressed, love your wording, blessings Carl

Jack Horne June 15, 2014 at 8:23 AM beautiful write, Nette : )

Richard Lamoureux June 15, 2014 at 8:08 AM Magical! You have such a way with words Nette.

Ravi Sathasivam June 15, 2014 at 3:20 AM Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Tim Smith June 14, 2014 at 10:15 PM You have been blessed with a beautiful pen nette..to walk the endless strands...hugs Tim

Ken Carroll June 14, 2014 at 1:25 PM Lovely romantic write Nette rich with imagery!

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