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Eternal Ring

Gold never ending, left fourth finger ornament Inscription inside tells the beginning date for the union God's joining, never severed Love's symbol placed loving by a joyous December bride Groom's cake, the old ball and chain, red velvet, looked like a bleeding heart on the table Friends rejoice at the final celebration of the forever union. Lord's will, we will rock our senior years away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/1/2009 6:38:00 PM
this was lovely to read - funny and sentimental -
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Date: 11/30/2009 3:30:00 AM
Nicely done Romanticism. Remember the story of the old man and woman who were too weak to rock and couldn't remember a thing. Keep the magical pen flowing. Mom
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Date: 11/29/2009 7:46:00 PM
Well done! Enjoyed reading here as well :)
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Date: 11/29/2009 7:22:00 PM
Hi Doris! thanks! not as far as I can tell! write anything you want! I made it funny to imitate what was handed to me! and I will go back in... I forgot to list the tags! its fun to see where its been! jimbo
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Date: 11/29/2009 6:54:00 PM
lovely poem! Doris! I just tagged you in a Holiday Tag-Poem! hope you are able to pick it up!!!!
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Date: 11/29/2009 6:21:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts put to pen... Excellent.....:JP]
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