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Eternal Pain

It is a night of ethereal pain, a song of sorrow rakes my wane, ghosts of my past vent their howls. The ethereal souls stir; fog shrouds their stalking frame, their brooding agony fallows me. Moon beams cascade over dark and tragic shadows, and the sorrow of my pain fade to gray, as my life begins to change. Now a night of shared tears, I remember my pain as a ghost remembers their past life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/20/2017 1:03:00 AM
You write well, Amanda. Nights are always harder, aren't they? I love the last stanza. (It is Free Verse, if you like to use the right form)
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Date: 6/19/2017 8:47:00 PM
I love this. Nicely written :)
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