Eternal Love

I want to tell you that I love you before my death.
I need you to know how I feel before I take my final breath.
I was unable to tell you those three words before.
I'm telling you now because we won't be together anymore.
I just got shot in the back by your insane dad.
Dying doesn't scare me but being parted from you makes me sad.
Not being able to become your husband is something that I seriously regret.
I want you to go on with your life but I hope our love is something you won't forget.
Please remember these final words that are true.
We will be parted but for all eternity I will love you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 21, 2011 at 7:07 PM
lovely emotion packed rhyme. Very well penned
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