Eternal Love

J ade green, beautiful eyes,
A ttracted me to you.
M y love for you is strong,
I will always love you,
E ternally with my heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lopez Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 11:57 AM
A true heart felt piece, I'm lad you choose to share your work with us. Keep it up, nice job Tyler
Shahwan Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 10:47 AM
Mesmerizing.
Davis Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 12:14 AM
Nice acrostic, I like the first line..
Moreno Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 7:04 PM
Nice work, a true romantic display of your heart. I'm sure she will enjoy your loves conviction in words...Raul
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