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Nature's magic crept up and covered hills ethereal wooded and grassy frills. Earthly soul swore its love touch approvement of the intriguing breeze-pushing movement. The wind drew in a deep breath listening and clinging to the infant's christening. Ball of light emerged, linked to its living, for vast boundless eternal life-giving.
Written 3-2-2025

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Date: 3/12/2025 4:14:00 AM
This is splendid, Eve:)
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Date: 3/7/2025 11:30:00 AM
Such a lovely poem Eve....for me it has a haunting feel to it! Debx
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Date: 3/4/2025 10:33:00 AM
A beautiful poem, Eve. Best of luck in the contest, my friend.
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Date: 3/4/2025 4:31:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Eve :) - (I think you have to choose only two) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/3/2025 12:03:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Eternal Life" write with a great ending. "Good Luck" I also did this one. Have a great time writing away.................
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Date: 3/3/2025 11:32:00 AM
A lovely poem and so well written Eve. Good luck in Constance's contest. love phyl
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Date: 3/3/2025 9:39:00 AM
Dear Eve, What a beautiful tribute to nature’s magic. I love the way you create life, breath, and love together. It is truly enchanting. Your words carry such calming, sacred energy. I’m so grateful for your friendship and your poetic spirit. Keep sharing your gifts! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 3/3/2025 5:54:00 AM
Really cool two liners Eve. My fave is the first set. It sets the tone for the rest
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Date: 3/3/2025 1:28:00 AM
Beautiful Eve
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Date: 3/2/2025 10:59:00 PM
Too depressed. I can't write, really. No contests. Your poems are always great. Loved the emotion. Best for a win.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/3/2025 5:54:00 AM
Sorry you're down Vic. I'm not feeling inspired either
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/3/2025 1:28:00 AM
Is not quantity, I really enjoy you poems for depth and diversity!

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