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Eternal Life

Nature's magic crept up and covered hills ethereal wooded and grassy frills. Earthly soul swore its love touch approvement of the intriguing breeze-pushing movement. The wind drew in a deep breath listening and clinging to the infant's christening. Ball of light emerged, linked to its living, for vast boundless eternal life-giving.
Written 3-2-2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Daniel Avatar
March 12, 2025 at 4:14 AM
This is splendid, Eve:)
M  Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 11:30 AM
Such a lovely poem Eve....for me it has a haunting feel to it! Debx
Brotherton Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 10:33 AM
A beautiful poem, Eve. Best of luck in the contest, my friend.
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2025 at 4:31 AM
- A beautiful poem, Eve :) - (I think you have to choose only two) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 12:03 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Eternal Life" write with a great ending. "Good Luck" I also did this one. Have a great time writing away.................
Babcock Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 11:32 AM
A lovely poem and so well written Eve. Good luck in Constance's contest. love phyl
Rodgers Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 9:39 AM
Dear Eve, What a beautiful tribute to nature’s magic. I love the way you create life, breath, and love together. It is truly enchanting. Your words carry such calming, sacred energy. I’m so grateful for your friendship and your poetic spirit. Keep sharing your gifts! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Vaso Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 1:28 AM
Beautiful Eve
Buhagiar Avatar
March 2, 2025 at 10:59 PM
Too depressed. I can't write, really. No contests. Your poems are always great. Loved the emotion. Best for a win.
Vaso Avatar
March 3, 2025 at 1:28 AM
Is not quantity, I really enjoy you poems for depth and diversity!
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