Eternal Is My Love

i; Life


Drowned within the deep love of affection
The certainty of heart-felt pledged inside,
Too deep and which without a full protection
Allows these depths to simplify what died. 

Attentions, that complain of these ordeals
Which ill divide what knowing you has caused
I'm in between frustrations', and it feels
My breathing's stopped or even worse it paused.

I see yet not an eye moves which distracts,
From loving what it is explaining why's 
That dying needs to be when verse attracts,
Adoring you without those sad goodbye's.

Perhaps, my words will cherish you enough,
Permit me if you will, that love shall last,
As long as life itself revolves this stuff,
Romance has played, eternal, not surpassed.

ii; Death

Crowned beyond confines to this disclosure,
As seen as only high above can please
More soothing than a sigh to heal exposure
Making clean the wounds in love's appease.

I feel, yet without source directly sense,
The inhibitions greatly known achieve
You knowing I was dead, but commonsense
Would eagerly prestige it make-believe. 

From all the wise decisions I have made,
Incredibly the journey I pretend,
To take, and this with you, I serenade
That many words shall mean this not the end.

Dimensions, that explicit love has owned
Are reasonable to say, "I truly will",
Divide my love which once before postponed
Enchantments to eternity we seal.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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