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Eternal Flames Honoring Nature

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Written: September 25, 2023 __________________________________________________________ Deep in the realm of nature, a raging inferno A power that was blazing for eons, a volcano It is always there, on the verge of imminence. It will sing and act for plenty across Providence. Shrill cries of the toadflax, as sounds in the night, Whispering secrets upon the ash-covered sight. Petals of vibrant shades, ablaze with life As the fire rages on, its flames spawn strife. The wind carries its messages far and wide. A scent of pine wood wafts on the ember side. An unparalleled sense of power imminence. In the midst of a warm embrace and eminence It writes its chapters among a million stars. Flapping in the breeze, carrying the scars The pooled image vaults and historic tomes Rooms loosened with worth, cups of roams. The natural world's walls are akin to a scroll. The mind-roaming eye captures control. Praying hearts caught as a leaf in the wind. Months spent taking solace via lap of mind One of the first officers to venture door to door. Lost troops who drove amid peak fires that occur. The edge is rimmed with undulating brilliance. Wise lands contain the key to valuing endurance. To a fire-forged past, a narrative carved in time. The might of nature is shown by undying rime. During darkest nights and most severe storms It stands towering and sturdy, a symbol of reform.   It remains unwavering in the face of adversity. It understands its flames have power worthily. To be reborn and renewed as rising out of fire. Eternal flames, a testament to nature's dire

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Date: 9/26/2023 2:36:00 PM
This piece is eloquent and the use of nature through your verses is sincere and passionate. Such a rhythmic way to your words with profound value. A beautiful poem to read and enjoy.
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Date: 9/26/2023 2:20:00 PM
Powerful work; may your flame always be in your writing!
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Date: 9/26/2023 6:28:00 AM
- A deep and meaningful poem, Las ... love how you end this wonderful write :) - hugs
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Date: 9/26/2023 6:01:00 AM
We find comfort when amid nature--despite life's many aches and hurdles--so wonderfully your message resonates my friend.
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Date: 9/26/2023 2:45:00 AM
Hello Sotto,very beautiful poem,with a wonderful message about the uniqueness of nature! Have a blessed day my friend!
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Date: 9/25/2023 11:25:00 PM
Very beautiful poetry, with a beautiful message about the power of nature!
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