JC Brul Poet Nonet

Eternal Flame

His
                                                       fiery
                                                  eyes exude
                                               burning ember
                                             killing winter chill;
                                         His heart a ball of fire
                                        rolling on her fingertips;
                                     Ascending from dark labyrinth~
                                     Eternal flame ~ her  sanctuary. 

                               Your eyes still as fiery as wild fires~
                                  melting everything you gaze on
                                       like my poor algific heart
                                          slowly reviving beats
                                           killing your last heat
                                                until your eyes
                                                 turn placid 
                                                     again
                                                      once.





                                                  12.22.2020

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Paula Goldsmith December 22, 2020 at 8:21 AM Congratulations on your win with your Eternal Flame. Enjoy your win with blessings.................

Sara Kendrick December 22, 2020 at 4:40 AM Congrats on your great winning work. Thanks for dropping by my page and taking time to comment on my work. Sara

William Kelii Kekaula December 21, 2020 at 6:42 PM Impressive Nonet final entry! Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, and my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William