Kiley Glass Poet Rhyme

Eternal Darkness

Eternal darkness-I did seek
How sweet, the taste of suicide
And I finally learned
On the day that I died

Then some hot-shot doctor
With all of his gall
Saved my wretched life
But what of my damned soul?
10/20/15

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Laura Breidenthal December 10, 2017 at 3:19 AM Perfect! Love this one! Always, Laura

Skat A October 15, 2015 at 9:38 PM Hi Kiley, Nice to see you on Nate's winning list. Congrats... Love SKAT

Robert Lindley October 14, 2015 at 7:54 PM A unique take and a haunting message- what of that soul? Congrats on your win.

Shirley Rebstock October 14, 2015 at 5:31 PM Unique poem. Congratulations on your win

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 13, 2015 at 11:44 PM Wonderful take on the theme Kiley with this superb winning write! Big congrats!

Nathan D. October 13, 2015 at 9:42 PM I would have given this a high score if your wording was a little more poetic on the last four lines. However, it was the best. ' thank you. Nate

James Inman September 30, 2015 at 1:13 PM Intense, Kiley! Interesting philosophical and religious undertone.