Eternal Candle

Eternal candle dancing vibrantly under the evening dome,
With excited eyes sparkling like a million diamonds burning bright;
You are the beacon that will forever guide my way back home.
In times of darkness and despair brightly you will shine my endless night.

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Eternal candle burning brighter than a million fireflies in the month of June
Like a runway you direct my every path on my travels through the dark.
Eternal candle it is you I trust as I walk underneath a sackcloth moon;
Your are the compass steering the course of this ever-wandering bark.



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 7:41 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 25, 2016 at 5:56 PM
:) SKAT
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July 14, 2015 at 7:11 PM
Hi Mary, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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July 14, 2015 at 6:16 PM
Mary, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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