Darren Watson Poet Verse

Eternal Breeze

Whispering wind , Sweet whispering wind 
please carry my love on your breeze
We've been parted so long 
In my arms she belongs
Carry her home to me please .
Whispering wind , Sweet whispering wind 
I place my faith in your gentle breeze
I said things unkind , Put doubt in her mind
Please carry my sincere apologies .
Please carry my kisses and my hearts only key 
Gentle breeze. Eternal breeze , Truth in all you touch
Bring her safely home to me
I am missing her so much.

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Tim Smith February 10, 2014 at 7:20 PM Very beautiful my friend Darren Watson February 10, 2014 at 7:36 PM Thank you Tim delighted you enjoyed it buddy.

Kelly Deschler February 10, 2014 at 5:53 PM This poem is quite beautiful, Darren. I really loved it! These sad, yet heartfelt words seemed to flow effortlessly from your pen. Wonderful work! Darren Watson February 10, 2014 at 6:06 PM Thank you Kelly but the pen you speak of was partially loaded with invisible ink and the words I wanted to write are missing . I will do better. Daz

Skat A February 10, 2014 at 4:38 PM Hi Darren, heartfelt, and moving. I feel the sadness in the whispering wind, and the longing you need her safely in your arms... Thank you. SKAT Darren Watson February 10, 2014 at 5:45 PM Thank you Gail . I did reply earlier but my replies keep jumping . Must have a ghost in this machine. Darren Watson February 10, 2014 at 5:14 PM Thank you Gail for both the comments and the affection . Love and cuddles , Daz Darren Watson February 10, 2014 at 5:11 PM Have a feeling of melancholy tonight and I'm determined to shake it off . A glass has never been half empty for me and its never going to be . Thank you SKAT .