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Eternal Breath

Eternal Breath Each time I laugh out loud I feel a little cloud Because as my breath exhales from me I hope it’s not lost in eternity. When you pull a face you know From your parents you did grow We take on some of their ways Be it from genes or length of days. Is that smile from mum or dad? Or the ancestors we had Each one passed on their last breath None really lost in death. For the last breath that you breathe Is the one that will not leave I kissed you dad as you passed away That tearful and such heartfelt day. But dad as I kissed you I inhaled your dying breath But you know you live in me It was not the end in death Your last breath you did leave I breathe it now and know That when my time is here My eternal breath will flow. My dying breath I leave For my sons their lives to lead Each breath that we all take Through each journey that we make. From where our seed began The birth of earthling man That first created breath Is eternal, not stilled by death. © GG 8/11/2013

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Date: 11/30/2013 8:06:00 AM
What a wonderful thought! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/27/2013 6:46:00 PM
A very heartfelt and beautiful write, Mandy! So well done! Congratulations on your well deserved win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
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Date: 11/27/2013 2:57:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/27/2013 6:53:00 AM
well done Mandy a poignant write. Robert
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Date: 11/26/2013 9:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Mandy
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Date: 11/26/2013 8:05:00 PM
This one gave me goosebumps..very moving....congratulations Mandy...
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Date: 11/26/2013 7:54:00 PM
great write Mandy...very moving....congrats on your win
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:21:00 PM
Hi Mandy, , that is awesome how everyone got a first place... Now that's a fun loving way of saying. Back Off all you haters, it's my contest and I do and enjoy what I want. Love Gail, for that.... Every poem I read was beautiful so far.... ~Hugs & Congratulations with your "Eternal Breath" awesome win... Always ~ LINDA
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win Mandy, I really love the last stanza, such an encouragement line :) wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, Yanny
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Date: 11/26/2013 2:39:00 PM
- Eternal Breath Contest: Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - A contest that was at least for me a deep theme. - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, VERY SKILLED WRITTEN!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/21/2013 8:12:00 PM
Love the poem...and love the theme as much. Such an insightful way to look at things that I never even imagined.
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Date: 11/15/2013 12:16:00 AM
gosh, mandy, I love where you took the them of eternal breath. Quite the touching poem from you!!
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Date: 11/14/2013 7:16:00 AM
Yes, within each of us is that ancestral pool which gones on and on most times..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats..I like the topic and flow of this work..Sara
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:46:00 AM
I love the very deep meaningful concept of eternal breath you've so succinctly composed here Mandy. Excellent stuff from you indeed!
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Date: 11/8/2013 4:53:00 PM
So glad you are actively back! Light & Love
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Date: 11/8/2013 11:32:00 AM
I've been a fan of yours what seems like an eon now,, and Mandy this as just got to be one of the best i've ever read of yours,,,, this is deep only a feeling you could enhance, and bring to light,, as life is when sentiment is the power,,, and girl you've have the power....
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Date: 11/8/2013 11:01:00 AM
We live on in our words and deeds... and our genes flow on indeed... Terry (nice poem)
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Date: 11/8/2013 10:02:00 AM
a very touching idea. it's nice to think that we have our ancestors living on inside of us and that we'll live on after we're gone, too. i enjoyed this poem, mandy!
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Date: 11/8/2013 9:35:00 AM
a lovely poem, Amazing.
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