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Eternal Breath

I think about you, every single day,
Since from me, you were taken away,
Your absence has left my world cold,
Now I am alone, with no hand to hold.

I wish that I could bring you home,
So that your soul, shall need not roam,
I hope that you were given white wings,
To fly amongst, where the angel sings.

Within my heart, your eternal breath,
Shall now linger on, even after death,
My love for you shall never cease,
So, may you always rest in peace.







Written by: Kelly Deschler  

Gautami Phookan's contest - The Poet III

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For Gail Angel Doyle's contest - "Eternal Breath"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/1/2014 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful touching poem Kelly.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/6/2014 1:39:00 AM
Thank you for the nice comments and kind congrats. I appreciate it very much, Brenda.
Date: 10/1/2014 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations Kelly! Lovely, enjoyable although the content is sad. Most striking line: " Within my heart, your eternal breath". hugs // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/6/2014 1:24:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Paul. I'm glad you enjoyed my sad write. These subjects are never easy to write about, but I really think it helps to do so. Hugs :)
Date: 10/1/2014 9:49:00 AM
Fine emotional write, Kelly. congrats on the win
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/6/2014 1:14:00 AM
Thank you very much, Dr. Ram.
Date: 10/1/2014 8:58:00 AM
Incredibly emotional write Kelly that we can all relate to. Man congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/5/2014 6:59:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comments and congrats. I really appreciate it, Jan. Hugs :)
Date: 10/1/2014 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, a sad write for you but your feelings are so beautifully expressed here.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/5/2014 6:38:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words, Maurice. This was not an easy topic to write about, but I think it helps to express these painful feelings.
Date: 12/14/2013 7:35:00 PM
Some sad poems can express a haunting memories, one that won't allow the writer to be set free, but that's ok because poetry in my mind is emotions expressed great work here i enjoyed your work. cheri and thank you for your comments
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/14/2013 10:13:00 PM
I have heard it said that true poetry is written from the heart and the soul, and with feeling and emotion. And, I believe that, as well. Thank you so much, Cheri!
Date: 12/11/2013 7:03:00 PM
A wonderful win Kelly, For a wonderful poem....Roger
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/13/2013 4:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Roger!
Date: 12/10/2013 9:30:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Kelly
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Date: 12/10/2013 8:48:00 PM
love the win, Kelly...hugs..linda
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/11/2013 2:57:00 PM
Thank you very much, Linda! I appreciate you stopping by. Hugs to you! :)
Date: 12/10/2013 3:41:00 PM
congrats are in order, I believe for a second time!! This is a well deserved win, poetess!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/10/2013 4:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea! That means a lot coming from you! :)
Date: 12/10/2013 11:59:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: "Put Your Best Rhyme Forward" contest: Sponsored by: Just That Archaic Poet - Nice to take part - a pleasure to read yours Kelly - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/30/2013 8:11:00 AM
Another winning poem. Your pen sings with beauty. Congrats.
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Date: 11/28/2013 5:38:00 AM
another stunner from your pen Kelly congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/27/2013 2:56:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/27/2013 12:00:00 PM
I see you've won two straight in the contest. Congratulations and keep up the good work.
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Date: 11/27/2013 3:59:00 AM
many congrats on your top spot kelly xx
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Date: 11/26/2013 9:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kelly
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Date: 11/26/2013 7:52:00 PM
Kelly..a lovely poem...congratulations on your win...
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:20:00 PM
Kelly, , that is awesome how everyone got a first place... Now that's a fun loving way of saying. Back Off all you haters, it's my contest and I do and enjoy what I want. Love Gail, for that.... Every poem I read was beautiful so far.... ~Hugs & Congratulations with your "Eternal Breath" awesome win... Always ~ LINDA
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:05:00 PM
You are a winner ..I have to say I love every poem , I am reading ..looking for the one you suggested ? You have got my attention , you are my kind of writer ~
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Date: 11/26/2013 4:45:00 PM
Congrats on another win Kelly, Your on fire....Roger
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Date: 11/26/2013 2:39:00 PM
- Eternal Breath Contest: Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - A contest that was at least for me a deep theme. - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, VERY SKILLED WRITTEN!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/15/2013 10:22:00 AM
Whoever left you, I will deal with ruthlessly, hehehe.... A good one, a really good one!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/15/2013 6:49:00 PM
Thank you for having my back! :)
Date: 11/13/2013 5:30:00 AM
As with your other contest entry, I think you have yet another strong contender for top placement. Another beautiful gem from you, SP! :)
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Date: 11/2/2013 5:55:00 AM
i feel your pain, kelly.. how profounf and deeply expressed; you move me!..:) huggs
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