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Eternal Breath

I think about you, every single day, Since from me, you were taken away, Your absence has left my world cold, Now I am alone, with no hand to hold. I wish that I could bring you home, So that your soul, shall need not roam, I hope that you were given white wings, To fly amongst, where the angel sings. Within my heart, your eternal breath, Shall now linger on, even after death, My love for you shall never cease, So, may you always rest in peace. Written by: Kelly Deschler Gautami Phookan's contest - The Poet III _______________________________________ For Gail Angel Doyle's contest - "Eternal Breath"

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/1/2014 1:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful touching poem Kelly.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/6/2014 1:39:00 AM

Thank you for the nice comments and kind congrats. I appreciate it very much, Brenda.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/1/2014 1:05:00 PM

Congratulations Kelly! Lovely, enjoyable although the content is sad. Most striking line: " Within my heart, your eternal breath". hugs // paul

Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/6/2014 1:24:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words, Paul. I'm glad you enjoyed my sad write. These subjects are never easy to write about, but I really think it helps to do so. Hugs :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/1/2014 9:49:00 AM

Fine emotional write, Kelly. congrats on the win

Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/6/2014 1:14:00 AM

Thank you very much, Dr. Ram.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/1/2014 8:58:00 AM

Incredibly emotional write Kelly that we can all relate to. Man congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan

Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/5/2014 6:59:00 PM

Thank you for the kind comments and congrats. I really appreciate it, Jan. Hugs :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/1/2014 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, a sad write for you but your feelings are so beautifully expressed here.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/5/2014 6:38:00 PM

Thank you very much for your kind words, Maurice. This was not an easy topic to write about, but I think it helps to express these painful feelings.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/14/2013 7:35:00 PM

Some sad poems can express a haunting memories, one that won't allow the writer to be set free, but that's ok because poetry in my mind is emotions expressed great work here i enjoyed your work. cheri and thank you for your comments

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/14/2013 10:13:00 PM

I have heard it said that true poetry is written from the heart and the soul, and with feeling and emotion. And, I believe that, as well. Thank you so much, Cheri!

Roger Horsch

Date: 12/11/2013 7:03:00 PM

A wonderful win Kelly, For a wonderful poem....Roger

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/13/2013 4:46:00 PM

Thank you very much, Roger!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/10/2013 9:30:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Kelly

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2013 8:48:00 PM

love the win, Kelly...hugs..linda

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/11/2013 2:57:00 PM

Thank you very much, Linda! I appreciate you stopping by. Hugs to you! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2013 3:41:00 PM

congrats are in order, I believe for a second time!! This is a well deserved win, poetess!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/10/2013 4:41:00 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea! That means a lot coming from you! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/10/2013 11:59:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in: "Put Your Best Rhyme Forward" contest: Sponsored by: Just That Archaic Poet - Nice to take part - a pleasure to read yours Kelly - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/30/2013 8:11:00 AM

Another winning poem. Your pen sings with beauty. Congrats.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/28/2013 5:38:00 AM

another stunner from your pen Kelly congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/27/2013 2:56:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Honestly J.T.

Date: 11/27/2013 12:00:00 PM

I see you've won two straight in the contest. Congratulations and keep up the good work.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/27/2013 3:59:00 AM

many congrats on your top spot kelly xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/26/2013 9:25:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Kelly

Donna Jones

Date: 11/26/2013 7:52:00 PM

Kelly..a lovely poem...congratulations on your win...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/26/2013 5:20:00 PM

Kelly, , that is awesome how everyone got a first place... Now that's a fun loving way of saying. Back Off all you haters, it's my contest and I do and enjoy what I want. Love Gail, for that.... Every poem I read was beautiful so far.... ~Hugs & Congratulations with your "Eternal Breath" awesome win... Always ~ LINDA

Shanity Rain

Date: 11/26/2013 5:05:00 PM

You are a winner ..I have to say I love every poem , I am reading ..looking for the one you suggested ? You have got my attention , you are my kind of writer ~

Roger Horsch

Date: 11/26/2013 4:45:00 PM

Congrats on another win Kelly, Your on fire....Roger

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/26/2013 2:39:00 PM

- Eternal Breath Contest: Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - A contest that was at least for me a deep theme. - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM, VERY SKILLED WRITTEN!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kennedy Muitherero

Date: 11/15/2013 10:22:00 AM

Whoever left you, I will deal with ruthlessly, hehehe.... A good one, a really good one!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/15/2013 6:49:00 PM

Thank you for having my back! :)

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 11/13/2013 5:30:00 AM

As with your other contest entry, I think you have yet another strong contender for top placement. Another beautiful gem from you, SP! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/2/2013 5:55:00 AM

i feel your pain, kelly.. how profounf and deeply expressed; you move me!..:) huggs