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Written: September 03, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ Under cotton clouds, a bride awaits. Her building passions burn and blaze, With petals of hope, her dreams unfurl. As love's tapestry begins to swirl. Bathtub battles, raging within her soul, A tempest of emotions, outside control. But before the child's time for bed, She finds solace in the world ahead. In dreams, she sees bees and birds. Their gentle whispers, as soothing words. Ads in the air, they fall apart, But the blossoms in her heart start, To bloom and blossom, vibrant and bright, Guiding her through the darkest night. Apples in an aged woman's arms, Symbolize life's charms. An artwork piece in oil on canvas Captures her spirit, her dreams, and her passions. Life's battle calls, "drug on. To build and build until we're gone. But even then, back on earth with cover and crust, The dance of blossoms continues a must. For life's eternal cycle, it never ends. From birth to death, it transcends. So let us embrace this wondrous dance. With love and hope, let's bear a chance. In the midst of chaos and strife, There's beauty in the journey of life. With each raw day, let blossoms bloom. Releasing fragrance and dispelling gloom. In the bride's heart, passion still burns. As she casts and frames, her spirit yearns. For the dance of blossoms, forever divine, A symbol of love, a sacred shrine. So let us join this eternal dance. With joy and grace, let's bear a chance.

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Date: 9/5/2023 1:40:00 AM
- I fell into the glories of spring ... by your words ... as beautiful as can be described ... a wonderful poem, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 9/3/2023 11:45:00 PM
You had me worried for a moment dear friend ! I was completely perplexed trying to imagine the bride's bathtub battles. Was it something that my innocent mind didn't know about ? Then relieved to read on that the bride had children! Its a beautiful poem Lasaad. I truly love it.
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Date: 9/3/2023 4:13:00 PM
Dear Poet, your poem is just captivating! With stunning images, and wondrous choice of words, you have created a gem, which I truly enjoyed."In the midst of chaos and strife, There's beauty in the journey of life." These two lines, to me, render your philosophy of life and love. Best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 9/3/2023 2:30:00 PM
Hi Lasaad, what a brilliant poem, my friend i so enjoyed reading it. There is dark and light and hope and fear, and birth and death, it all belongs to the dance of blossoms - the last stanza summarizes your poem and my comment. I am so sorry for my absence from commenting to many of my good and loyal friends but i have not been very well, business has been hectic and I had to find a fine balance to cope with everything. Hugs and blessings Lasaad, Jennifer. l
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Date: 9/3/2023 2:29:00 PM
Ahh!! Beautiful tulips in blossom. A deep love affair of the heart described in this one. Thanks for sharing and for your kind review of my work. Sara
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