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Eternal

Eternal ocean, potent force, the cradle of life's very source— our planet's cool, embracing arm, the sailor's foe, the artist's charm. We all must honor ocean's might, and keep its grandeur in our sight. The gull who cries above the swell, the fish who swims, the lucent shell, the shifting sand, the salted breeze— my strength abides in each of these. Beneath the sunset's painted skies, I feel the ocean's fall and rise— and I know that a part of me still tumbles with the mighty sea.
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Lillico  Avatar
March 19, 2023 at 7:58 PM
Ocean’s Jewel! You got an admirer, not a secret one;)
Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 6:28 AM
An imaginative poem on the powerful ocean in fab rhyming wow! Kudos! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Pandit Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 5:29 AM
I like the imagery throughout. So well written!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 1:58 AM
An ode to the sea. So well written.
Rolland Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 7:16 PM
an excellent penning, i join you for the hommage to oceans, cradle of humanity, i Suppose, strong words and images, so lovely feelings, i adore yann
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