Etchings

hoarfrost coats the grass
etching it 
like acid on a metal plate
defeating the
morning glories 


*10/20/12

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2012 5:49:00 PM

Hello Lady, , :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/9/2012 1:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Debbie, I love to see a hoar frost xx

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 11/8/2012 3:42:00 PM

Wonderful write,Debbie.Congratulations on your win ....Kudos to you.....

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/8/2012 10:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/7/2012 9:41:00 PM

This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Deb.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 11/7/2012 5:15:00 PM

congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2012 4:06:00 PM

marvelous one, Debs, well deserved win!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2012 5:50:00 PM

Soon and very soon it will be here..It is in the upper fourties now at night..I thought that I had read this one before but I guess I had not..Creative and expressive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/22/2012 9:26:00 AM

SOUL MAIL, DEB!

Len Gasun

Date: 10/21/2012 7:53:00 PM

This is another awesome poem of yours I've read today my dear great poet friend, Deb. All the best and luck always! hugs:) LG

Kathryn Collins

Date: 10/21/2012 8:55:00 AM

Sensational, Debbie. I'd say more but it's all in the poem. love, Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/21/2012 5:52:00 AM

It shining of your beautiful poems also Debbie. Winter is too long and cold ..... Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/21/2012 4:47:00 AM

yes indeed Debbie, any resistance from the late bloomers, usually fall at the first frost.. love the way you have constructed this wonderful little verse.. love the Title also...

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/20/2012 9:45:00 PM

I hate that frost...it attacks all my flowers and leave them weeping...Thanks for reading and comments made. Really enjoy your writes. One love. Joy wells