Etchings

hoarfrost coats the grass
etching it 
like acid on a metal plate
defeating the
morning glories 


*10/20/12

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Poet Destroyer A

November 10, 2012 at 5:49 PM

Hello Lady, , :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

November 9, 2012 at 1:48 AM

Congratulations on your win Debbie, I love to see a hoar frost xx

Olusegun Arowolo

November 8, 2012 at 3:42 PM

Wonderful write,Debbie.Congratulations on your win ....Kudos to you.....

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 8, 2012 at 10:46 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

November 7, 2012 at 9:41 PM

This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Deb.

Joann Grisetti

November 7, 2012 at 5:15 PM

congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

November 7, 2012 at 4:06 PM

marvelous one, Debs, well deserved win!

Sara Kendrick

October 23, 2012 at 5:50 PM

Soon and very soon it will be here..It is in the upper fourties now at night..I thought that I had read this one before but I guess I had not..Creative and expressive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Tim Ryerson

October 22, 2012 at 9:26 AM

SOUL MAIL, DEB!

Len Gasun

October 21, 2012 at 7:53 PM

This is another awesome poem of yours I've read today my dear great poet friend, Deb. All the best and luck always! hugs:) LG

Kathryn Collins

October 21, 2012 at 8:55 AM

Sensational, Debbie. I'd say more but it's all in the poem. love, Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 21, 2012 at 5:52 AM

It shining of your beautiful poems also Debbie. Winter is too long and cold ..... Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

October 21, 2012 at 4:47 AM

yes indeed Debbie, any resistance from the late bloomers, usually fall at the first frost.. love the way you have constructed this wonderful little verse.. love the Title also...

Joy Wellington

October 20, 2012 at 9:45 PM

I hate that frost...it attacks all my flowers and leave them weeping...Thanks for reading and comments made. Really enjoy your writes. One love. Joy wells