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Etching the Day

I love a room that overlooks A river or the sea, For, on a terrace with some books, Is where I like to be. A sunny seat, a view with boats And birdsong in the air, A husband who, upon me, dotes - Why, nothing can compare! A mid-day ice cream, browsing stores, A walk along the shore, A bowl of mussels, Guinness pours - Well, who could ask for more? But all good things must end, they say, So now we’re heading home And on the way, I’ve etched the day Into my daily poem.

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Date: 4/24/2023 10:40:00 AM
"etched the day into my daily poem" - well done my friend! Well done!
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Date: 4/8/2023 10:22:00 AM
With a view like that, I'd never get any reading done, I'm afraid. I love reading your "homey" renditions of your life experiences, Ilene.
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Date: 4/7/2023 8:04:00 AM
Lucky you! And I'm envious. My apartment doesn't have a balcony, so I can't have a bird feeder, too messy says the management. Rubbish, I say. What about the residents who think nothing of throwing their cigarette butts all over the grounds? As they say, you can't argue with city hall. Count and enjoy your blessings, Ilene. / Maurice
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Date: 4/4/2023 2:33:00 PM
Some people choose to complain about their birthdays, but here you are counting your blessings. I love your attitude and always enjoy how you compose your thoughts.
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Date: 4/4/2023 12:12:00 PM
- What you describe is my everyday life, Ilene - ... and I agree it is wonderful - The only thing we are missing is stores and ice cream :) - Happy Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 4/4/2023 9:26:00 AM
Thank you. It was a lovely day. I enjoyed spending it with you, Ilene:)
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