Etch-a-sketch for the occasional redo

clean slate snow screen shaken not stirred
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Makama Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 10:54 AM
This is beautiful. I love this masterpiece. Happy new year friend. Keep the lines blessing.
Gauthier Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 7:45 PM
Thank you so much, Funom. Most appreciated.
Dawson Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 10:20 PM
The last line really frames the poem: "muted etch-a-sketch" is such a great description
Gauthier Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 5:38 AM
Thanks, JR. Much appreciated.
Thomas Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 12:06 PM
A clever description Line! Wonderful.
Dawson Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 10:19 PM
I agree, it is a clever description
Gauthier Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Thanks, FJ. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 1:04 PM
Beautifully done. Happy New Year Line.
Gauthier Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 2:58 PM
Thanks, Caren. Best wishes to you and your loved ones.
Romios Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 10:04 AM
Creativity at its Besf, line Panagiota HNY
Gauthier Avatar
December 31, 2019 at 2:59 PM
We like to start them young. Happy New Year, Panagiota!
Mcguire Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 5:59 PM
different, I like it :)
Gauthier Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:27 PM
LOL
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 5:37 PM
excellent ku!
Gauthier Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:27 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Adams Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 9:34 PM
love this...i always adored playing with them when my children had them... hugs
Gauthier Avatar
December 29, 2019 at 10:16 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sandra.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 6:15 PM
Really cute. I actually used the word etch-a-sketch today. I said to my grandson, “don’t shake the tablet like an etch-a-sketch .”
Gauthier Avatar
December 28, 2019 at 8:30 PM
That's funny. I wonder if etch-a-sketch is considered an antique yet. LOL
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