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Poverty stands close ready to knock Bare essentials just those Much love, human companionship Lessons in life imposed As a boy he learned to work He didn't love it but did With willingness he plowed the mule No brothers' work him outdid Responsive, responsible boy Turns into a selfess man A reliable mature human Remembers where he began Quick to laugh, quick to understand Quick with mercy and gifts He was positive strong man Things for himself meant thrift Caring, cheerful affectionate Thoughtful in most ways Faithful devoted husband He's greatly missed today Inspired by Gautami Phookan's contest Sketch A Character Not an entry This is some of my father's positive characteristics

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Date: 11/2/2014 6:08:00 AM
Thanks for sharing with us the memories of your father. So sweet a poem. It is a learning experience Sara...love....rajat
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Date: 11/1/2014 11:50:00 PM
he was the Salt of the earth kind of man, Sara. You come from good stock!!! Good luck in the contest. I am sure this will do well.
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Date: 11/1/2014 7:38:00 PM
You have made a wonderful tribute to him here Sara. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Date: 11/1/2014 2:08:00 PM
Great memories shared of your dear father, Sara. It must be so special for you to remember him when you do, and am sure you must miss him in your life. Enjoyed it!;) xxxx D.
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Date: 11/1/2014 12:38:00 PM
- A great husband, father and friend - a lovely poem written from your heart Sara - Thank you for sharing your beautiful memories of your dear father. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/1/2014 11:04:00 AM
Such wonderful self-reliant characteristics displayed in this tribute. Heartfelt and well written lines. Miss mine too !!
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Date: 11/1/2014 10:28:00 AM
An awesome tribute right from the heart, from the one he held on his knee. A great man is one who loves his family and that is who I met today. Thank-you for sharing.
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