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Et Cetera Done In End Rhyme

Should I write in rhyming words are you babies I should coo and speak of love and little boats and of Dr. Seuss’s zoo. Should I write of baby dolls in rhyming words oh so sweet Are you babies or men all aged and complete. I should coo and speak of love of pacifiers and bottles and little boats and planes above size with a throttle. Should I settle for small little men who never tire of Dr. Seuss's Zoo or go to bed, and say amen let the throttle through.

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Date: 3/2/2012 9:08:00 PM
I think this is a livley little write Debbie,, how are you by the way..........? oops..! my finger slipped; i enjoy all kinds of 'po'try..) and i think i think... yes you have stirred a sleeping view of "the stuff" within me..) I wonder how this may manifest itself..? "anyway enjoyed reading your words today...)
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Date: 3/2/2012 1:44:00 PM
Cute ..Got a chuckle.:)Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/2/2012 12:27:00 PM
Bravo! Excellent example for your own contest, Deb. I found it interesting that you chose Dr. Zeus over Dr. Seuss. Perhaps all men feel like kings, just as Zeus was king of the gods and goddesses in mythology. Great way to express your feelings in rhyme. Quite remarkable! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/2/2012 12:06:00 PM
Cute and funny Debbie....admire you,always. - oxox love Anne-Lise(thanks for "help")
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