Estranged Love

"Estranged Love" By M. Taha Effendi (Rhyme) Countless days came and passed, each day in misery spent. every day I live as my last, since the day you are absent. Each day I hope of your return, I find my hopes desert me. To bear this pain the more i yearn, the more it grows to hurt me. I tried to live. I tried in vain, my efforts bore no fruit. I fell apart living in pain, but my love stood resolute. Then late one night I cried to God, tears streaming down my cheeks. Please hear my plea, I beg you Lord, I've starved myself for weeks. If you must then change my fate, please let me be with her. For this long and futile wait, proves too much for me to bear. Rid me of this suffering, my fate rests in your hand. For i exist as something, that is neither dust nor sand. Comfort me with a lie if you must, so i wont writhe again. Or tell the truth so i may just, end these throes of pain. Death will be my solace, when such agony is rife. I'll surrender to its sweet embrace, to end my wasted life. I cried to God with all my heart, I begged for her in one last breath. For being alive while torn apart, is a fate worse than death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 11/5/2011 10:53:00 PM
I know this feeling bro, and understand how it feels. You've expressed it well. Great write!
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Date: 9/23/2011 5:47:00 PM
Amazing - on to the finish!
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Date: 10/19/2010 12:09:00 AM
Thank you so much for appreciating my poetry Liz:)
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Date: 10/17/2010 9:40:00 AM
ThIS WRITE is such an astonishing pretty write, i love it and :D
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Date: 10/13/2010 12:02:00 AM
Thank you so very much Yamin uncle and Umair for appreciating my poetry. Don't miss the second part of this poem which I have posted separately. Have a good day my freinds and family.
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Date: 10/11/2010 7:03:00 PM
Assalam o Alaikum, i was just browsing for my pakistani fellows and finally i found you, first of all i would like to welcome here on the poetry soup and then i would like to give my appreciations for the first poem you wrote which is really a lovely piece of script - Umair Ulhaque - Visual Artist & Creative Writer
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Date: 10/11/2010 11:47:00 AM
Dear Taha, Welcome to poetry soup. I love your amazing poem. Please be a regular contributor. I am sure you will benefit from the comments of Soupers. This poetry fraternity comprises excellent poets well versed in the art of poetry writing. Read them and be benefitted charming style of writing and rich contents. Good luck -Mohammad
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Date: 10/9/2010 7:21:00 PM
I thank all of you for welcoming me into your fraternity so wholeheartedly. And thanks again for enjoying my poetry. I'm really just a beginner right now as you may have deduced after reading my first poem. But I hope to polish myself by learning much from all of you. And hopefully I'll do much better poetry soon. Thanks once again...
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Date: 10/8/2010 2:52:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry tonight.. hope u check out the contest page offered to members to enter..good luck with luv...
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Date: 10/8/2010 12:36:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. I enjoyed reading your poem
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:50:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Taha. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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