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Tocando puertas; una vez más, 
Agrietando los fragmentos existentes, 
Ahí; no llueve sobre el mar. 

Alzando coros de preguntas, 
Indigestando; nacen los sentimientos, 
Lágrimas, sutiles notas en el aire. 

Buscando; café en la cuidad, 
Ahogando en silencio las respuestas, 
Abriendo rocas; desesperado. 

Uniendo instantes olvidados; 
Lejos del fuego sofocante, 
Ignorando gritos; constantemente. 

Eliminado al Ego de alimento, 
Tacto elocuente, inalcanzable; 
Encontrando estrellas en tu ojos. 

Destellos de nada; Absolutamente, 
Aparentes reflejos de sol; callado, 
Esperando por ti. Una vez más.

Copyright © John Tyler Kafman | Year Posted 2016

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Daver Austin Date: 4/15/2016 12:22:00 PM I got out my Spanish-English dictionary, but it was no use. Anywho, welcome to the soup. I'm sure your Spanish is better than my English. Love, daver Login to Reply John Tyler Kafman Date: 4/15/2016 11:55:00 PM Dear Daver. I must admit that my native language is Spanish. I still like to write in English occasionally. I'll have either a literal translation though. probably hoping in vain to convey the essential meaning of my writing. I greatly appreciate your welcome, to be the beginning of a future friendship in all aspects. Knocking doors; once again Cracking existing fragments, There; no rain over the sea. Choirs raising questions, indigestioning; feelings are born, Tears, subtle notes in the air. Searching; coffee in the city answers, Drowning in silence, Opening rocks; desperate. Attaching forgotten moments Far from stifling heat, Ignoring cries; constantly. Ego eliminated of feed, eloquent, unattainable touch Finding stars in your eyes. Flashes of nothing, Absolutely Apparent reflections of the sun as silent, Waiting for you. Once again. JTK

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/14/2016 12:34:00 PM - Thank you for your first poem, John :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply John Tyler Kafman Date: 3/14/2016 11:14:00 PM hugs for you too Anne-Lise, and thank you very much for the warm welcome. I am looking forward to read you.

Skat A Date: 3/14/2016 11:37:00 AM John, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Login to Reply John Tyler Kafman Date: 3/14/2016 11:13:00 PM thank you very much, really feels good to be here and be a part of this excellent group. Hugs- JTK

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/13/2016 9:51:00 PM I don't speak Spanish, but I somewhat understand when reading .... Love Linda Login to Reply John Tyler Kafman Date: 3/13/2016 11:04:00 PM And I must admit that my native language is Spanish. I still like to write in English occasionally. I'll have either a literal translation though. probably hoping in vain to convey the essential meaning of my writing. I greatly appreciate your welcome, to be the beginning of a future friendship in all aspects. Knocking doors; once again, Cracking existing fragments, There; no rain over the sea. Choirs raising questions, indigestioning; feelings are born, Tears, subtle notes in the air. Searching; coffee in the city, answers, Drowning in silence, Opening rocks; desperate. Attaching forgotten moments; Far from stifling heat, Ignoring cries; constantly. Ego eliminated of feed, eloquent, unattainable touch; Finding stars in your eyes. Flashes of nothing; Absolutely, Apparent reflections of the sun; silent, Waiting for you. Once again. Love, JTK

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/13/2016 9:50:00 PM Bien bonito y pesado, John,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply