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Essentially 2

(Dedication: For Paul Callus) Time and space dance Sorrow meets cheer Sync with tact Joy ever fades Nothing much remains Dust gathers Joy even tempts Offers nothing new Dinosaur bones Charm feeds Empty charade No escapade Charm leaks Messy tirade Lament in loss Words come Echoes fling Not much done Words leave Takeaway noise Not much gain Write in rhymes Sign a song Mind the glitch Write in lines Reason a poise Mind the route End game pulse Matching Point for point End game tense Cleaning up Awkward feel Haiku nature Senryu posture Cinqku textures Fibonacci pulse Strain in void Quantum creation Leon Enriquez 10 Apr 2014 Singapore

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/14/2014 11:25:00 AM

Well...what can I say!! Thanks for the honour:) I really do appreciate it :) Took some time to comment on these haiku; you know how I am....I read, slowly, chew, digest; read between the lines and draw out my own conclusions (which might well be different from yours). Haiku requires such attention. // You're getting better at this; I enjoyed all of them and find it awkward trying to single out the best. for sure this will go in my favs. :) cu // paul

Leon Enriquez
Date: 4/14/2014 12:04:00 PM

Dear Paul: Glad you like the verses. Leon