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Essentially 2

(Dedication: For Paul Callus)


Time and space dance
Sorrow meets cheer
Sync with tact


Joy ever fades
Nothing much remains
Dust gathers


Joy even tempts
Offers nothing new
Dinosaur bones


Charm feeds
Empty charade
No escapade


Charm leaks
Messy tirade
Lament in loss


Words come
Echoes fling
Not much done


Words leave
Takeaway noise
Not much gain


Write in rhymes
Sign a song
Mind the glitch


Write in lines
Reason a poise
Mind the route


End game pulse
Matching
Point for point


End game tense
Cleaning up
Awkward feel


Haiku nature
Senryu posture
Cinqku textures


Fibonacci pulse
Strain in void
Quantum creation



Leon Enriquez
10 Apr 2014
Singapore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/14/2014 11:25:00 AM
Well...what can I say!! Thanks for the honour:) I really do appreciate it :) Took some time to comment on these haiku; you know how I am....I read, slowly, chew, digest; read between the lines and draw out my own conclusions (which might well be different from yours). Haiku requires such attention. // You're getting better at this; I enjoyed all of them and find it awkward trying to single out the best. for sure this will go in my favs. :) cu // paul
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 4/14/2014 12:04:00 PM
Dear Paul: Glad you like the verses. Leon

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