Nette Onclaud Poet Couplet

Essence of Your Love

Where refrains of fate moans a Wedding song
And pledging “I do “is one  vow adorned. 

The evening tides brush this ache quite lonely;
Stars whisper, " Dream of us; there lies the key."

Your shadow turns, I feel your air once more
As essence of love wraps me like before.





Essence Of Your Love Contest: Gail Doyle
by nette onclaud: 1/29/2014

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 29, 2014 at 2:32 PM Love is flourishing through all the verse..:) Weee kilig ..:) Late congratulations :)

Skat A February 26, 2014 at 6:29 PM Nette, Congratulations with your beautiful essence of love win. Have yourself a good one. Love ~ SKAT ~

Sara Kendrick February 21, 2014 at 10:30 AM This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta February 21, 2014 at 4:20 AM Lovely write on the essence of love and congrats on the fine win, nette

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 21, 2014 at 4:14 AM Well composed perfect Nette ! Deserved great win congrats !! Loved reading each line !!

Andrea Dietrich February 20, 2014 at 10:24 PM you really captured this theme, Nette. Another congrats for you. Fantastic win!

Robert Rogers February 5, 2014 at 4:13 PM Wonderful flow N.O....enjoyed//Sinclair reading this piece twice!!

Bl Devnath February 2, 2014 at 8:48 AM I smell here mystery of love. Loved much the lines of beautiful sensational words "Our glances touch, a never ending............... .....And pledging “I do “is one vow adorned", in between everything happened in hearts. Good luck, my lovely friend, bl

Chris Boskovski January 30, 2014 at 11:36 PM yet another contest "Essence of your Love" and they're only getting better and better. Hi Nette, What a romantic and brilliant poem! I love it from the first line till the last. I am a Romantic and I can really feel the love in your words! Good luck in the contest. :) xoxo

Lucilla Carrillo January 30, 2014 at 9:18 PM This is very beautiful and it will do good in the contest. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Cherl Dunn January 30, 2014 at 6:24 PM Bravo loved reading this write you have warmth, emotion and it has a dreamy quality to it. great job here cheri

Richard Lamoureux January 30, 2014 at 6:17 PM I think this will do very well Nette. I like the mood you have created with this ominous romantic piece.

Harry Horsman January 30, 2014 at 4:22 PM I read this, then i ponder on the Essence of your poetry,,, and how lovely it is....

Andrea Dietrich January 30, 2014 at 4:13 PM awesome one for the essence of love, Nette. I don't know if I will even get home in time tonight to get mine entered!!

Darren Watson January 30, 2014 at 1:04 AM Stunning . A delightful read . Thank you for making the start to my day so beautiful.

Audrey Haick January 29, 2014 at 11:07 PM Wow!! Sweet , awesome , delightful....all fitting words to describe this beauty, Nette! A definite winner to me and I'm sure that Gail will fall in love with it too! Well done...and no surprise there either! Love, Annalise

Russell Sivey January 29, 2014 at 10:26 PM Wow, this is an incredible and awe inspiring write my friend! You sure know how to impress Nette! I surely loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!

Manny Paras January 29, 2014 at 6:25 PM Really astounding and sad.The last stanza is just a dynamic ending for this.

Shadow Hamilton January 29, 2014 at 3:24 PM a true poem of love so poignantly expresses Nette gl in contest Shadow x smile hug

Charmaine Chircop January 29, 2014 at 2:12 PM Such a musky air filled with love's essence sweet Nettie.Always a pleasure to read!!!

Sara Kendrick January 29, 2014 at 1:29 PM Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for stopping by..It is very expressive and creative work that you have penned...Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2014 at 1:01 PM - A wonderful poem, Nette !!!! - Love it!! - Luck in contest, hope you win. - Have a nice day ... many huggs - oxox // Anne-Lise :)